All Comments on 'You Will Be Mine..Again Ch. 03'

So excited to see this update as always it was awesome and I can't wait for the next submission.

lol, so glad you finally updated :) i love the tension between Gale and Patrick, cant wait to read more.

Have been waiting like ages for the update on this lovely couple. Please don't keep us waiting that long again......

Another home run. Looking forward to the next installment and his eplanation.

v3

Five.

Why did you arbitrarily change the names of your characters? Gail to Gale to Gayle, and Maria/Mara? It really takes away from the flow of the story.

i used to love this story, like your other stories. But this story is too gloomy, too sad. I miss your wittiness in your characters. But i will wait always - n

Great update, it needs a bit of proofreading but other than that I love the flow of this story, it feels realistic especially the tension between Gail and Patrick I like the slow build up because they have a complicated and hurtful past so the "boy finds girl again have a romp in the sack and realized they love each other" doesn't work with all the emotions that needs to be sliced through. I can't wait to see where this goes in Ch. 4

SO well worth the wait. I just hope you are able to update a lot quicker this time around. I so love watching the characters grow.

where did your editor go?

Really great.

I love your story, i don't find it too dark or gloomy, Gayle and Patrick just have a different path. Keep writing!!

We need more to go along with the appetizers that you have served to us...

Your characters are great, Gayle and Patrick's relationship will need to be worked out soon, and that ex-wife of his will need to be removed from the equation soon or they will never have any closure or happiness, whether together or apart! Ooooh, it is about to get good. Please don't leave us hanging too long.

Awesome! Thank u

but wouldn't mind faster updates.

I love the story, but Patrick needs to man-up,oh oh and will you be doing a story on Nicole and her lover boy lol. I am eagerly awaiting your update thanks

this guy dumps her and basically tells her he was just using her and then marries someone else a few months later. Now he is back in her life and Gale reactions are not normal even if she does her some feelings left for this man.

You should maybe pick just one. I like this story, but you seriously need an editor. The grammar and editing errors are frustrating, not to mention the poor word usage. It detracts from an otherwise interesting story. I like the story though.

-lisaisalefty (reading from another computer, sorry, can't access my account)

The word is Roladex, capitalized because it is a word that describes its use; like Xerox is standard for copying, but it is a brand name of the paper used.

I will need some serious explanation from PAtrick to consider feeling for their relationship. Really: don't let that girl fall again for him before he not only explain and apologize but WORK HARD to EARN her back.

Patrick is that itch thou hate to scratch but it always feels good to until guilt sets in

Patrick had some so of competition I feel like Gail is a sitting duck he eventually going to get her I just feel it shouldn't be so easy.