All Comments on 'Good Idea at the Time'

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roomfor1moreroomfor1moreover 12 years ago
Excellent stroy 5 starts

Well written story and very enjoyable.

The concerning aspects of the story for me were the fact your wife went beyond the agreed boundaries and did not talk to you about changing them alone. In addition, she left with Paul when in fact, Paul should have followed the two of you to the hotel. If she did leave with you then the both of you could have talked about it. Third your behavior in the story indicates that you were not happy with Kathy changing the plans thereby putting you in a situation where you agree that it happens or have her cheating on you. Finally your closing remarks indicate there maybe some ramifications for the relationship because of the night. These aspects leave me, as a reader, wanting to know what were the results from that evening, good or bad?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
incoming low scores

these willing cuck stories usually fare better in Fetish

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
what a fucking idiot

just shoot the bastard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
1 star

The marriage is dead time to move on.

looking4itlooking4itover 12 years ago
My fault

Should have looked at your other stories before reading this one so I'd know not to bother. Won't happen again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

what a twit, this guy. A cynic could think it was some manipulation on her part for the setup.

Sidney43Sidney43over 12 years ago
Doesn't work

The story does not work for me. The wife is hot, but is frigid, so the husband relates to us. We are told nothing else to indicate the marriage is having problems in any area except sex. So they go to a bar and the wife gets some strange from a man who of course has a much larger cock (don't they all???). The husband passively watches this happen and then the other man leaves with a thank you (polite isn't he?).

Nothing to indicate she would do this, nor that the husband wanted it to happen. Just kind of a surreal happening that seems quite a bit of a stretch in the real world.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hot!

Paul is a master. He knew how to take his time easing into her. I'm sure hubby learned a lesson. Question is, will Paul be back in her life during and after the divorce?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
pathetic

maybe mike should bat for the other team.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Not a bad story

There are a few guys here that have multiple accounts to rate 1 star on these stories. Don't let it bother you. The story works even if it is unlikely to happen in real life as laid out in this story.

The only problem I see is that it is full of cliches. The husband has a small dick and only lasts a minute or two. The new lover has a huge dick and gives her pleasure like she has never had before. He goes along with it but he doesn't want to. But then of course he is turned on and whacks off.

Frankly, the story is too short and leaves too much to the imagination. I would get rid of the cliches to an extent. If they've been married for a long time, it is understandable that the spark is less than it used to be. You don't need to go overboard and make the husband out to be pathetic on every level. In fact, you don't need to make him pathetic at all.

As to the wife, she doesn't have to be frigid with the husband to make these stories work. In fact, she can be very kind and loving towards her husband. The sex between them doesn't have to be bad either. She can actually love the sex with her husband. In fact, in my humble opinion, it works best when she is very much in love with him, and loves sex with him, but they do this just to have some fun. The formula is, the husband is average in size but knows how to please his wife through years of practice with her. She feels a deep emotional connection with him while making love that she won't with a new lover.

However, they do go out of their way to find a guy who is maybe a bit younger, very fit and strong, and yes, a little, or a lot bigger than the husband. The idea being, if physical pleasure isn't more intense, why even do it, because the emotional connection will not match up to what she experiences with her husband.

I do like that the other guy was polite, and I do like how the wife wanted to put on a show for her husband. It wasn't just for her pleasure, she wanted to be something they did together. There does not have to be a "humiliation" factor to this. If the understanding between the two is that she is in love with her husband and no matter how good the other guy is, she will only love her husband, then there is no humiliation to this. It is simply something they share together. The other guy is little more than a real life sex doll. She has fun with him but doesn't love him, she loves her husband.

As to the idiot who said this fare better in fetish. Sorry but this section, Loving Wives is the right place for "Hot Wife" stories and was set up for that in the first place. The subtitle says it all. "Tales of adventurous married women & their mates." Notice the emphasis on the woman being married, but there is no emphasis that thee sex is between her and her husband. In other words, the subtitle says nothing about husbands, or married couples.

Stories about married couples are actually supposed to be placed in just about any other section depending on what the storyline is. Loving Wives is good if it is a husband is sharing his wife with friends or strangers. If a large group though, it might be better placed in Group Sex. If it involves something kinky like a foot fetish, then Fetish is the place for the story. If it involves taking her ass, then of course Anal is the place for the story. If it involves pain and submission, then the BDSM is the place. If it involves a romantic encounter between the husband and wife, then Romance is the proper section.

If it involves just some sort of Erotic Encounter, like maybe the husband getting her off in a restaurant in a way that isn't showing off to everybody, or maybe taking her on a deserted subway car with nobody around, or her showing up to his office in nothing but a trench coat, then it is best put in Erotic Encounters. If it involves them showing off for others to see, then it would go in the Exhibitionist & Voyeur section.

If the husband is doing the wife and her sister at the same time in the same bed, then it would go in the Incest/Taboo section. The point here is that there is no one section for married couple sex. It depends on what the story line is as to where you put it. However, wives having sex with men other than their husbands does go primarily in the Loving Wives section. It was the primary reason for the section being created.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Goodish loving wives stroker

thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Agreed good fetish stroke story for those into cuck stories. Writer you have found your audiance.

clearlakequeenclearlakequeenover 12 years ago
Nice Story!

Though the commenters here have different ideas about what happens in the early stages of cuckolding, us cucks do. When a woman begins feeling sexual and aroused by a new man after so many years she turns into a cougar. There was no question on my part or my wifes after my first cuckolding.

He was a true stud in every sense and lasted hours compared with my 10 strokes. Afterward my wife TOLD me she was seeing him again and I could not blame her for finding sexual satisfaction that i could not provide.

16 years later we are still in love, and I am still a cuckold.

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 12 years ago
Funniest story ever Leaving me to ponder whether my marriage would ever be the same.

truly. Its obvious she loves to fuck and fuck and fuck and fuck.

just not with you dumb ass .

How did it go from talking to other men at a bar for a few minutes and idea the wife did NOT find appealing to

...PAUL I LOVE YOUR COOOOOOOOOCK...

There is NO marriage.

There never was.

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 12 years ago
Hey clearkaequeen

That photo of you --in your profile...pretending to be the world's ugliest woman ...is the saddest most pathetic thing anyone has ever seen in the history of the human race

Scorpio44Scorpio44over 12 years ago
Call a lawyer...

the marriage is over. The answer to the last line is easy, it will never be the same. Life is never the same after we discover something better than what we had. As kids do we go back to a skateboard as our main mode of transport after we get a car? Oh, the title is misleading... it was never a good idea. IMHO.

deadonedeadoneover 12 years ago
Answer - Dead as a door nail

She has no interest in Mike at all. The wedding ring is already off. She went from talking to fucking and rubbing Mike's nose in it. She does not want Mike, does not respect Mike, does not ever care about Mike.

p.s. She obviously did this without any trouble, which means she has been doing this already.

The fat lady has sang (the ex-wife).

Time for Elvis to leave.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
You Idiot

She really didn't like sex with him? She got excited with other men ogling her? She really didn't want to go play single at the bar and, in the course of one evening, she gets turned on, likes a guy, tells her hubby that her new friend is going to the hotel with them, openly kisses and makes out with him and finally - naked - tells her new guy that she wants her husband to watch?

You're a cuck aren't you? A submissive? I read this story expecting she was going to end up getting a strange lay but, as it progressed with her apparent disrespect for hubby, I honestly felt that at some point while they were fucking that he would go and get her necklace, leave, go home and pack! So what she's attractive, she's also a cheat and apparently a potential sneak with NO respect for her husband!

Wake up!

I know it's a story and pretty good but I have to believe that, with your attention to detail, that if you are attached, you get your kicks knowing your other is truly enjoying real men without you!

james_38671james_38671over 12 years ago
yes

very hot, would love to see my wife fucked like that

mstrb77mstrb77over 12 years ago
More soon

Yes you might be out of a wife, OR a big OR a wife that now loves cock and will fuck at the drop of a hat.

You have to decide if you can take her having more men to fillher with cream and bigger cocks,

Or get a lawyer and call it quits.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
pathetic shit

this shit storyline has been done to death. what a load of crap!!

WifeWatchmanWifeWatchmanover 12 years ago
Great story!

Don't let the naysayers that hide behind the "anonymous" tag bother you. This was a great story! I hope you'll write more, and draw out the relationships more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great

cant say why exactly but I loved this story....this one just caught my attention ...great job

chief573chief573over 12 years ago
Please more!!

ST, this was a great start. Plz continue the story. Kathy may be a little remorseful at first, but the memory will stay with her and will grow. Hope that Paul gets a 2nd and 3rd act, progressively demanding more of her with each encounter...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
1*

Cuckold+whore+slutskankbitch=1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow.

All the braindead wimps crawled out of the wood work to cheer on this pile shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Anon-not a bad story

What the fuck, you writing a book. Why not write a story of your own, got enough wind for it. What the hell do you know about what other readers do, got multiple accounts? Your ass. This story stunk, just like your comments.

SegamiSegamiover 12 years ago
Meh...

The ending was kind of weak. If there's no continuation, I'd give this story a two or three. Also, 'cuckold' needs to be added to the tag.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
GOOD IDEAS AND BRAINSTORMS

only materialize if one is not being led. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Fools

For one, not seeking psych help earlier in the marriage.

Two, for not communicating with her sooner at the bar.

Third, she went for the whole program.

Fourth, she isn't timid at all and just let her husband be confused and bewildered while she had a great fuck and cuckold him.

Good story.

When she walked over to him at the bar, hand in hand, with her new lover and told him she had invited him to join them - he should have paid the bill, got in his car, gone home and packed. At some point, he needed to realize that she was not the woman he thought and there was no respect!

Thanks! But, no marriage here and if there was - it is over now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
what marriage, it is obvious she has no interest sexually in her husband

and from her behavior in the story it raises the question who has been taking care of her sexual needs all the time they have been married. A shame to find you and a cuck and to have it thrown in your face this way. Divorce the bitch she has played you long enough, cut your losses and run.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
OK...

Not quite my cup of tea because I like happy endings where everybody gets what they want. But, overall it was pretty well written, above average because there were few spelling/grammar/punctuation errors. But, it didn't make me hard so I only give it a three, would have been less but the quality of the writing has merit. I might have liked it more if the ending hadn't been left the way it was.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What a fucking cunt

that bitch is,i'd punched that bitch so hard in her fuckin face i'd drove her fuckin nose into her fuckin little brain

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 11 years ago
Bad

As the title says, "Good Idea at the Time."

Hmmm. Guess not.

HA

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Neat story

I am not sure where it would go and I'm not sure that really matters in this case. Very erotic but I actually don't care if it is an erotic end to a mariage or the beginning of a hot arrangement, probably because I didn't find anyone especially empathetic.The story is horny as hell in spite of the lack of character development. A similar scenario with more sympathetic figures could lead to a thrilling series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
makes a husband think..

The first part of the set up at the bar probably has been in the mind of a many of husbands... I have observed this more than once in a bar. The wife comes in and 20 minutes later her husband come is to the bar... You could set your watch at the timing. This event repeated it self time and time again...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
betrayal

he smoked the fattest cock, his cornhole reamed, betrayed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
And Now.

While the content of this story could have been made into a really good story. All of the And Nows really killed it.

OOAAOOAAover 10 years ago
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

I love the way you write, how you increase the level of exciting throughout the story!!! 5 stars!!!

looking4itlooking4itover 10 years ago
Ugh

A ringing endorsement by OOAA. That should sum up exactly how gay this story is...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
gee wiz, ducky. are we OK?

What marriage?

These scenarios are so weak and transparent, you can't even put some humanity in them.

God!

Why not just buy a porn mag to wank off to? They're far more personal and even have stories and articles worth reading.

Pube!

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
About the worst...

This was a very unsatisfying take on the 'voyeur hubby watching Sweetie at the bar' theme I can remember reading. Poor rationale to begin with, poor selection of a bar without dancing area, poor entry (go in together and separate?), poor placement, and exceedingly poor judgement by Hubby of going into the bedroom! As a matter of fact, Hubby probably needed to tell Sweetie (once he did get to the room and found her compromised) to pack up and they were going home...or she could stay there as long as she wanted...two or three weeks perhaps!

She lied to Hubby, or herself, before marrying him and he probably needed to cut his losses a lot sooner! Just stop chasing her!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well chalk up a ruined marriage

Served the husband right, should have left the wife alone and stayed away from this type of lifestyle, now for sure the marriage is ruined. better off walking away, next time he will find her in their marriage bed with another man. How sad

tae352001tae352001over 10 years ago
3 stars

A wimp story of a husband, should have drawn the line. Should have stood up for his marriage and his self respect. Made it clear.. Paul stays in the bar... no excuses.... if she pushed, ask her what was important... Paul or him... and if she makes a mistake ... stay somewhere else.. as for his wondering whether his marriage will be the same? Take a wild guess... no respect, none from either one, and especially from the wife... I would begin divorce proceedings and cut your losses. thankfully no children even split. Chapter 2 should be their divorce

Tim413Tim413about 10 years ago
I wonder.

Does this happen in real life? If it does, do the picked up lovers ever worry about the husband having a concealed weapon?

tae352001tae352001about 10 years ago
would the marriage be the same?

Take a wild guess, if the husband had balls, he would have taken her ring off, and said she is yours.. then look at her and say your belongs are on the lawn.. locks will be changed.. oh.. I was taking a quiet video too.. so our Pre Nuptial Agreement stands... Kick her to the curb

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
The Same?

Seriously?

The marriage was over when she brought Paul to the table, hand in hand, and asked (told) hubby what the plan was.

From occasional uninspired sex to a Hotwife...Really? She was all for the game and knew after a very short time that she was going to fuck Paul Face it, Mike really didn't do it for her and I don't mean size, she was rarely in the mood but now Paul turns out to be hot, electric and hung...oh yeah.

She'll be the same but he'll be single and back living in a one bedroom apartment and sleeping with 5 finger rosy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
what is with making wimps and cockolds?

I gave a 3? OK so you spice up your marriage with a harmless flirt, but now you take it to another level by cheating.. destroying your vows. The characters are not kids on prom date. Finish it by having Mike stand up and tell Paul wait.. walk up to his slut soon ex wife and yank the wedding rings off her neck, so carelessly hanging by a chain and then drag her skanky ass off the bed tossing her out of the room naked informing Paul she belongs to him now, I want nothing to do with sloppy seconds. Yes toss her belongings on the street and just add salt to the wound, Mike had his I phone recording the whole time to enforce the prenup ensuring Kathy received nothing from the ruined marriage. I suggest FinishTheDamnStory be a good choice to finish this story or re write it which ever occurs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
re: anonymous-not a bad story

Oh, don't worry cuckie, this cuckie author won't worry about his story, otherwise he wouldn't have posted it. Trash like this are a dime a dozen in loving wives. Nothing to be concerned about. Just give it the usual 1* and move on. To those who think shit like this is erotic, I feel for you. Must have a loose screw somewhere.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Dovorce or Hot Wife...

Was she curious with all of his talking about flirting and playing the bar game..yes!

A smart women, she kept saying with uncertainty that was he sure of this and, of course, he pursued it.

Well, not at the bar long and she is engaged in conversation with a stud and a few hours later, hand in hand, she announces (disguised asking) that she would like Paul to go to the hotel with them.

When he arrives, they have already been making out AND - she is totally in to it but not overtly showing it. Of course, the seduction continues with absolute cooperation from her and with no regard for hubby at all. The fuck session was erotic and mind blowing for her and, as she noted, never knew it could be that good! Well, she knows now so...

It was interesting that being seduced and fucked in front of her husband didn't bother her in the slightest. The future for these two is worrisome...for him because...she now knows what a turn on sex is, how a great fuck is a major turn on, seducing strange men is a euphoric experience, concern for her husband is non existent and she is definitely going to cheat whenever she is stimulated by a stud and/or be a Hot wife (hubby a cuckold) or, and probably, divorce after she has experienced a lot of men and - may have found one to be faithful to so...Divorce!

Hubby, apparently wasn't that good in the sack!

ChuckEPooChuckEPooover 8 years ago
Maybe a little longer set up.

I gave you a four. The reason is that the transition from reluctant wife to hot wife was just too fast. They needed to go to bar and her get her feet wet a bit. (Among other things.) then go home and her tell hubby that it was exciting. They make love like never before. This leads him to find she is not as prudish as thought. So he now encourages her to try again and again. Then their dialogue starts to contain the thoughts of actual encounters sexually. He finds he is also getting aroused by her exploits. Then roles are reversed with her wanting outside the marriage contact. Maybe have her say she would be to nervous and wants to explore it alone. So she goes out and phones back her progress. Like: Hun we are leaving the bar. I think you'd like him. He's a gentleman. Then: Hun we are at his room and drinking a cocktail. He's a great kisser. Then: omg he's huge. Look at this pic. Etc. anyway you're on the right track. Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Cuckold Shithead

Cuckold Shithead; watches his wife destroy their marriage and doesn't do anything except beat off.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
LE/LW needs a change

Cuck shit story titles need to be preceded with an asterisk. So men can avoif this crap.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
"So men can avoif this crap"

wouldn't matter, you closet-cuckolds would find it no matter what - read, spank, complain the comments, as predictable as the sun rising in the east

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I REALLY LOVED THIS STORY, GAVE IT A 5- (4.7/5.0 = 94% = A). THE STORY IS MY CUP OF TEA. I COULDN'T GIVE IT A STRAIGHT 5 (5.0) BECAUSE THE HUSBAND'S INNERMOST WORLD WASN'T GIVEN PROMINENCE IN THE NARRATIVE

I must admit we the readers could have infered what was going on in Mike's head...

Mike had already have strong voyeur inpulses before Kathy & he went to the pick-up joint. He had no idea his voyeur side was as strong as turned out to be. He was not aware at of his wiittol side.

• • •

The ending is PRICELESS, EPIC, you name it:

As he slipped back into his clothes, he turned to me and said, "Pleasure meeting you Mike. Tell Kathy I enjoyed her company."

And with that he walked out of the hotel room door, leaving me to ponder whether my marriage would ever be the same.

allsop72allsop72about 6 years ago
rats in the house

I smell 2 well acquainted rats and a well planned meet dumb as a stump hubby.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Re anon 08/30/17 (really loved the story): i totally agree with that comment. He put it very eloquently.

:-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Could be better

Quality writing no doubt. In my opinion this type of story is much better when it includes all of the aftermath. The leap from frigid wife to big cock slut was just to extreme.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love it: *****- (5-)!

Mike persuades his wife, Kathy, to flirt with a guy @ the bar.

(Mike, be careful what you wish for, you may just get it. just get it!)

boraddaboraddaalmost 4 years ago
We have experienced this story

Really related to this story, A similar thing happen to wife and me several years ago.The wife met this guy Ralph, by chance , found him very nice at a hotel we were staying at.

What followed was much like this story, she fell for him, and he flirted with her, what happened next , was this story almost word for word.

She now relives what happened from time to time, and on occasions when we have sex, she says Ralph fuck me hard like you did years ago, it makes me so good that she thinks Ralph is me, and our sex is great.

You should write further stories along this line, does turn guys on

thank for the experience

BeauReadyBeauReadyover 3 years ago

Always, the stranger's cock is twice the size (or larger) of the husband; this time to boot the loser is also a premature ejaculator. One has to wonder, why would any woman have married the man?

These stories are far too staged; just unbelievable. Therefore, boring, trite, predictable, infantile.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
LOVED IT (❤): ☆☆☆☆☆ (five stars)!

Excerpt from the story:

Quote: Paul glanced quickly at me then lowered himself to the bed. His tremendous cock was fully erect now, so huge that I wondered how my wife could possibly take him. Unquote.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Bravo! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5).

Very erotic. Kinky too. Also, true to life.

A wise husband will give his wife a hall pass.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

💚💚💚💚💚- [5- (4.6 of 5 = 92%)]!

This story is a wife sex fantasy but it is very similar to a myriad of real life experiences.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love this story, gave it a 5.0 = 100% (☆☆☆☆☆!) This story is based on many true events.

* * *

I strongly disagree with public coments that suggest that Kathy's transformation from a frigid wife to a hotwife could not have taken place in one evening.

- Mike had noticed that she liked when men ogle her.

- Mike was urging her to interact with other men when she finds attractive.

- Last but not least, everything is in constant flux always.

No woman ever enters the same pickup bar twice, for it's not the same pickup bar and she's not the same woman.

(i paraphrased Heraclitus.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A slag and a fag. Who cares.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ok, I'm not nor have ever been a "cuckold" or a humiliated husband BUT ... why such harsh judgment upon those who find it desirable to engage (better yet, their wife to engage) in such behavior?

The hatred of those who don't agree with a certain consensual lifestyle against those who are in a certain lifestyle is repulsive to me.

My motto - we make our own decisions and if you're not affected by it, then keep your stupid comments to yourself and live your own life the way you want.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Incomplete. While the beginning and middle are fairly well done, (except for the omission of how poor at sex that Mike apparently was) the ending didn't appear. Why didn't Mike try to intervene? Since Mike didn't intervene, does he really have any rights to complain?

At least there were no drugs involved to start the seduction; wouldn't classify this as rape. Kathy was well into Paul before smoking the pot with no resistance.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is a fantasy of mine also, to go to a bar and have wife flirt with other guys. Hopefully ending up into a 3some.

RuttweilerRuttweileralmost 2 years ago
The only way I can see this working…

…is if Mike is comfortable with being married to a dream woman that isn’t into him - at all. And, is really into getting her physical and emotional needs and desires met by other men.

Exclusively.

I guess he can meet her financial and housekeeping needs, if that floats his self-shaming boat. I see opportunities galore for humiliation and desperate unhappiness.

Not my cup of, well anything, really.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Why didn't you finish this story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Of course there marriage would not ever be the same again, hopefully if you continue with the story that is

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It’s a good story but he should have ruined her. Gotten her so used to his oversized cock he could whistle and have her when he wanted. She’s a submissive size queen and her husband can get her to agree to anything.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There were several comments about how bad Mike was sexually, I disagree, how could the guy have improved (if he needed to) when his wife "didn't like sex" and had every excuse in the book not to have it with him. Her actions that night at the hotel were just terrible. Why he stayed so calm is unbelievable. Divorce is in order for him, have her sign over everything to him. Tell her if she didn't then the video would be released whether he had one or not. She was so fucked on pot she wouldn't know. Dump her quick before she gets pregnant and the courts fuck with you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He's been trying to add spice into there life when he saw the glow in her eyes his marriage was gonei would have just left better to walk away then to be humiliated watching big dick run it in when she said omg he's way bigger then u I would have left just because he's smaller and lost his touch sex therapist she's not worth it

HARDUP1957HARDUP1957about 1 year ago

I have read most of your offerings and I realize you haven't written in some time now but I find myself feeling frustrated at the end because we never know what happened after the affair. Put an end to the story already.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

serpentongue

I’ve read several of this author’s stories.

They’re very sexy if you’re into a formal.

1. Husband and wife are together, maybe

have a sex problem

2. Husband and wife get physicality separated, one way or another

3. Wife is controlled by sexy man, big cock

best sex of her life, locks eyes with Husband

4. Husband has to watch them have sex

5. Wife is sexually satisfied, stays with lover

6. Husband wonders what’s to become of them

This is like the same person in different suit,

or the same tv sitcom with a twist each week

serpentongue, your grammar and sentence structure are ok. You really need to get a new

plot. Put this one to bed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I am trying to guess what you cucks like the best…….eating the other guys cum out of your wife’s cunt or the thrill you get when your wife tells you the other guy just fucked them to the best sex of their life?……and is 100 times better than you and your little cock is laughable compared to the REAL MAN’s cock that just fucked her? Which is it guys? R.H.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

What a dumbass.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Duh! Of course your marriage will never be the same - if there is even anything left of it.

This whole thing smells like a setup - by wifey. She's naked under her dress; which she's never done before. She's removed her wedding ring - putting it on a chain around her neck -- symbolic of slavery. The first guy hits on her before anyone else has a chance, and wifey bumps off anyone else trying to hit on her; and that's who she fucks. She goes to hotel with the "stranger", not her husband. Game; set; match.

Hubby simply "disappears". No complaints; no protests; no balls.

All too easy.

Sex was reasonably good, so 3*stars. Not a waste of time, but barely better than mere puffery.

Still, unreasonably beats up on men who suffer from medical condition causing premature ejaculation. And that is not only harsh and inhumane, but cold and flippant. There but for the grace of God go I. Wait until time catches up with you and hammers you with erectile dysfunction.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Upon the revelation that my wife was a size queen I wrote up a contract as her agent, set up a few auditions, and we headed off to the San Fernando valley and our new life.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

And the dumb shit husband and his whore of a wife lived happily ever after. Well, in different places and not so happy. The husband lost his mind watching his wife get royally fucked and caved Paul’s head in with a hotel lamp. Mike did 12 years for manslaughter in the Baton Rouge men’s correctional facility. He and his cell mate Tito had a slight adjustment period after Tito made it clear that Mike would be a bottom and he would be a top. You know, bunk beds! Mike was released for good behavior in 9 years.

Kathy started frequenting the bar of the same hotel on a nightly basis and arrived at a deal with the bartender where he would take a 30% cut of all her action. Kathy loved her new life as the hotel’s on call prostitute. She had a very nice converted stock room as her permanent living quarters. It came furnished with a lovely futon and a beautiful 9” lcd television. Unfortunately Kathy was anally gang raped by a group of Webelo Scouts posing as insurance agents in town for a convention. She was beaten so badly it was clear her salad days as a hotel prostitute were over. She died a few years later of a massive infection due to undiagnosed Chlamydia the same week her former husband Mike was released from prison.

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