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The King in Yellow

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by lucianlover07/22/11

Thank God... .

That I read this during the day and not at night.i must say a literary plague is quite funny.In this day and age where people really dont read I think it is safe to say that your story is an impossibility!!!!
Oh no,Ive read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous07/22/11

Very well written

Lovecraftian. This is extremely enjoyable and well executed.

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by Anonymous07/23/11

Nice!

There are lots of cheap stories out there, and some stories here aren't cheap. But it takes some real thought to pull something off like this. I've never thought that Lovecraftian horror could be sexy before. You have changed my mind completely.

Bravo!

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by elledee07/24/11

No words...

Completely speechless....

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by beasthunter07/26/11

Wonderful Concept

A wonderful, suspenseful, frightening representation of the power of words that has held us in awe since we developed sentience. I will now have to go read it.

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by Anonymous08/03/11

Brilliant.

I don't have another word for it. I think I've found a new favorite author. This is amazing. :D

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by Anonymous11/20/11

WOW

Very well done, sir. This story chilled me more times in it's reading than any other description/fan-made fiction based on this piece of Lovecraftian lore. I think the part that shocked me the most was the congregation tearing their priest apart to keep them from going insane. Very, VERY well done, sir.

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by Anonymous09/01/14

Creepy!

I liked it, but boy, it sure is creeepy! ;)

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