Old Fisherman and the Babysitter

Good read

Similar to another on this site but still a good read.

What a lovely story.

Thank you.

Hooked ....

Liked the story very much but I think she should come back and forth just for him.! Gave you a "5" and wish I could give you a "10".!*

Thanks. JAG

Double Cs

Interesting story, nice to see someone using the English language correctly. But just for info, there's no such bra size as Double C.

Great story

I really liked your story, especially the ending. I found it very well written and it really aroused me. I look forward to reading more of your work.

A Little Fishy!

One hellova read and a great story line. At least she wasn't a mermaid but another well built water species. Keep writing and we'll keep reading, good luck with the next one, ciao.

You did fine

Heart counts...

almost freakin perfect !

Excellent story and the presentation was even even better. Different. Wonderful. A few changes in the delivery and ... wow.

Thank you.

One of the most remarkable stories I've read on Literotica. Haunting, loving. The world feels like a better place. Please write more.

Wonderful!

A fantastic, well written story in so many ways. Could not ever have guessed the ending! Keep writing!

Swallowed his bait

A very good story, very well written and paced, with a superb ending that really was a bonus after the main action was over. A fishy, dishy treat.

great story

I loved it! The ending was especially imaginative!