All Comments on 'A Few Minor Adjustments Ch. 02'

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BordermanBordermanalmost 13 years ago
Getting better all the time

You have endless opportunity here please keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
more please

Great progression from 1st chapter. Hope you find some occasions to revisit the hypnotic trance & deepen the minor changes that are bringing her inner sex angel back to life.

liz33ndliz33ndabout 9 years ago
great story line

good suspense, and good story line, a few more details would be nice, but I still love it.

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceover 8 years ago
I'm not skipping ahead and hope to avoid "spoilers"...

But I really hope this doesn't blow up in his face somehow...

He really loves her and just SERIOUSLY wanted to improve their sex life... It would be too bad if he screwed it up and turned her into a complete slut, even for others...

Of course, it would be just as bad if she figured out what he's done and takes exception...

Crossing my fingers for them...

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