All Comments on 'Come Into the Dark Ch. 04'

if this is the last, then how do i know the story of their conversation, future, his trueself etc. But its okay, i will use my imagination hiks - n

Like the direction...almost missed it. Look forward to the next installment

I LIKE IT. JUST READY TO SEE WHAT HE IS....

I like the direction you are taking... can't wait for the next installment.

What the fudge is William, I'm finding this all sexy and alluring. This is heading in a direction that has me wanting you to put out another chapter like yesterday. Who was that bitch and why is there always one around a good man or.... Whatever...lol

there are a lot of twists and turns with story. Update soon so I can find out what\who William really is.

I love the plot so far. This is so cool wondering what William is and the sex is off the chain!

I love these stories please write more soon

Fucking love them! MORE!!!!!!!!!

"latest installment," in the beginning but, like the anonymous, I kept reading "last." All I thought when I got to the end: "Hell, to the NO! This CANNOT be the end." And then I realized what you'd meant.

Great story, I'm loving every bit of it. Now I need to know a few things... What is William? Do the top peeps at her company know what he is? Who is that crazy bitch, WTF is she calling him 'baby,' and how are you gonna get rid of her before her skank ass tries to do damage to Jen? LMFAO more than a few, but who's counting?

string along series here, but you can not leave it as it is; there must be more added to this with a history on all characters involved. Especially your main characters-William and Jen.

Looking forward to finding out what he is and if she is his mate etc???

I am enjoying the story. It is good. Please update soon like now!

Yay Just saw your updated and can't wait, hopefully it wint take long to post

update!!!!! i love the story, keep up the good work.

Pls update...this is such a good story...love it~

I love it!

Please, finish the story I love it and I am looking forward to more!

Minding my business and come across this gem......................what no conclusion???? Such cruel teasing. Please...please.......tell you are well into the next installment.

This motha is sexier than hell and you tease......come with something soon. This thang is too juicy!!!! This dude fucks like the devil...love it.

I was under the impression it would have an actual resolution. The story was decent despite several character name slips, but if this is the end of it you haven't done it or yourself any justice.

I'm thinking william is a vampire or a demon, loving it but I need more! PLEASE!!!

I love the story! Especially since me and the character have the same name. Is he a demon? please dont let him be a vampire, I would rather have him be a werewolf.

I too am extremely disappointed that there is no conclusion for this story. Unlike most, it is extremely well written and thought out. PLEASE FINISH IT. NOW. Thanks :)

they are an amazing couple! please don't leave us hanging, your writing is really good

Please finish it!

Plz, finish the story. I'm very curious

can't wait for what happens next. Don't keep us hanging.

that is all..lol

Can't to see what happens

Please, I'm beggng you to finish this story!!!

Is there anybody out there who will finish this story? Hello?

Life has been crazy!! But I have not forgotten this story. In fact, I've written and rewritten this story so many times!! I hope to have the next chapter up soon, and fair warning-- it will be a bit long!

More please! Loving it!!!!!

I've waited forevveeerrr to read more lol please update!!

Can we please get back to writing this one it is a great story and I need to know what William is. Please come back!

Please finish this story it is amazing...I love the charcters....and I want to hear what he is and how he reveal himself to Jen....can't wait until then.

OH MY GOSH! PLEASE COME BACK AND CONTINUE, PLEASE!!!! lol This is too good of a story not to continue.

More please!! I need to know!! :(

update soon please i have been waiting forever for the next chapter

Please update this soon.....don't leave us hanging!!!!

This story is awesome please update!!

You know you need to finish this! Is William a vampire or wolf or all white men creepily sexy like this!

lol love this story...been waiting for 2 years now