All Comments on 'Daddy, Please...'

Oh my god! This story is amazing. I got so wet trading this story. When daddy was spanking her it turned me on soooo much more. I got off to this story a couple times. Love it daddy keep up the great work!

Don't know where some authors were educated but they should go back and have their teacher removed from the job. This story is an example of such bad instruction, nearly all sentences contain "..." which isn't proper no matter where you went to school.

Really miss the point of literotica: This is a site for amateur and notable authors alike who take time out of their day to write a story to help make other people feel good. SOMEBODY should be thankful this nice man wrote a story to entertain your ungrateful arse.

Anywhooo, great story!! *soft sigh* I wish I had my Daddy here...

~ <3 ~

hey i loved it!!!

The challenge for a writer in writing father-daughter incest stories is in portraying the daughter as a credible young woman, rather than a character with the childlike mannerisms and dialogue of a six year old.

That, for me, is why this story left me feeling cold rather than hot.

Since other readers have responded positively, you will find a readership for this approach, but I think a more credible approach to the characters would greatly improve the stories.

Regardless of some comments, I like the story as is and don't mind the ...., grammar errors, it is more the way people talk. However the daughter is a little young in her vocabulary. But then again, that may turn on others.

More please. Keep writing.

I mean what guy wouldn't fuck her after licking her beautiful pussy and making her cum. Have DADDY TEACH HER!

Erotically presented but not overdone. Please write a sequel.

Lucky girl! ;) Write more!!

It made me wet! Please do write more!

like the passion - the animal urge and the underlying tenderness :)

at 18+, why do all the stories read, make the girls sound like ditzy 9 yr olds, who don't know what they're seeing? Sex Ed starts in 4th grade, for cripes sake!