All Comments on 'The Slave Girl'

by Cruel2BKind

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decadent_katedecadent_kateover 12 years ago
sweetness and lust

Nice story- the perfect combination of sweetness, reluctance and lust. Stories of painful first times get old very quickly and this was a pleasant surprise in being a different, very enjoyable and very well written story. Particularly impressive given your usual genre is gay male- I hope you consider writing more stories like this! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Begs for more

I liked it. IT was a good start with a lot of background.

Leaves the possibility of more to the story...

npiccininpicciniover 12 years ago
Nicely Done!

You give us such a wide range of characters, from hard and domineering to soft and sweet, I love that about your stories. Although it's not your usual, I really liked it!

Cruel2BKindCruel2BKindover 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

I may write others eventually, but now I have story threads to finish

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
A well-written

and arousing tale.

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 12 years ago
Holy hell!

Look what I stumbled across! Girl that was *so* hot, sweet and a joy to read. Just wow. And I'm not much for the straight stuff lol ;)

Great job!

~M

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good!

You definitely need to write more!! Part 2 perhaps?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
For a non consent story

That was lovely, sweet and tender. If only all deflowerings could be so sweet. Alas, men don't really get any good at sex until their late 20s...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story!

i'm so glad you listened to your friend. i really enjoyed this story. can you write more? i hope so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
v nice

One of the best I've read here so far.

barepussloverbarepussloverover 12 years ago
Great Start/Read!

Great start of a storyline that I hope there are additional chapters. Thank you! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great

This was a really great story, both in the setup and in the execution. You really know what you're talking about, esp. in terms of D/S & M/S relations. You shouldn't sell yourself short :)

KojoteKojoteover 12 years ago
Another one...

...out of your comfort zone.

And another great story.

HoniesroseHoniesroseover 12 years ago

Fantastic! Love your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very nice...

Very good story. You might want to leave out the cliches next time, though ("be gentle," "was it good for you").

Daniel1492Daniel1492over 12 years ago
Great Story

I really enjoyed your story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great

very good story dont stop writting!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
jjbreastmilk

very well done it would be great if you could make a sequel, one with her pregneant with a lot of breastmilk made only for her master to drink from(eventually shared a little with the child or put in a bottle for the child)

BellatrixieBellatrixieabout 12 years ago
Very sweet and hot

That was a really well written story. Since my preferred genre is m/m I am going to have to read your stuff because your writing is beautiful!

lusherlusheralmost 12 years ago

Please thank your friend who made you write this story on my behalf, and also ask him to apply more pressure for another just like it immediately. Seriously, though: that was one hell of a story, and I hope you'll work in this genre again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Favorite of all time!

I will save this story and read it often. I'm ruined for other authors. Please write more!!!

Harry LegHarry Legover 11 years ago
Nice

Great little story. Excellent work.

ZanzeRoseZanzeRoseover 11 years ago
loved it!

I hope you give us more of these two.

sun_sea_skysun_sea_skyover 11 years ago
Poignant story

Well written, cunningly concealing details about the place -- where-ever it is -- and the time -- whenever it is -- that it is set in.

One wonders what becomes of those two, but you could say that about a lot of stories. :)

damppantiesdamppantiesover 11 years ago
Wow!

I loved the setting, and I must confess I usually skip through the sex, but this one kept me hooked from beginning to end. Excellent work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
:)

That was a great story, I love how gentle and loving he was towards her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wow

so different from your usual genre yet just as amazing. You are a truly talented writer, I think what I love the most about your writing is that you really come to believe the emotions of the characters, its not about a quick fuck or a purely physical interaction, the emotions make it believable. Thank you for another fantastic read.

Jonny_BluelineJonny_Bluelineover 10 years ago
Very Nice!

This story deserves a continuation.

MEWatcherMEWatcheralmost 10 years ago
MORE!

Please add more. I look forward to reading your other stories. :)

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 8 years ago
Well written

Great but why is this in non consent?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Hmmm

Pretty good mr uhm faghag... I like some sweet in a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very hot.

Virgin30yearoldVirgin30yearoldalmost 2 years ago

You don't know what you did to a virgin like me... you made me think of what I'm missing out on:(. my nipples were rock-hard, from the beginning to the end of the story'' thanks

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