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by Fish_Tales07/22/11

Memories

Interesting how the memories of youth are so personal, yet so similar, as if there is a bank of memories that are just distributed between us. I could almost feel like it was about me! I'd done almost the exact same thing. Great to read.

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by theognis07/22/11

*****

Five.

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by WillowedCabin07/25/11

So much beauty in:

I longed to taste his
but couldn’t ask.

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by Anonymous08/24/11

Well crafted

Thank you for this thoughtfully written and shaped poem. -PandoraGlitters

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