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by Anonymous

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by naughty_nan07/29/11

Hmm interesting story. I'm curious to see what the next chapter will be about.

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by Anonymous07/29/11

Interesting new spin

I really like your story with all the possibilities that it holds. Good Job.

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by Deception_04/11/13

Hot, imaginative story

I love your writing style. I wish you would write more. I love the different things you come up with

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