All Comments on 'Please Cowboy? Ch. 06'

Love your story, hella exciting seeing him go alpha on her... but, erm...Well why did he reject her in the first place?

This story isn't lumped with the other chapters but if you go into ChynaMarie's other stories, you'll see the rest of the chapters.

i love this krazy love story. please dont have me waiting to long for the next chapter!!

I was also wondering why he didn't want to be with her in the first place.. That part was never addressed. I enjoy your writing :) Thanks for updating.

it was a great chapter just too short. oh well cannot wait for the next chapter.

And now she is mad? She should be happy. She got what she wanted... both of them hurt each other and still love one another but won't move on...

I've read most of this and these people act like idiots. I mean, yeah, everyone can act like an idiot. If Lily really doesn't want Scott, let her call the police -- let her do something rational.

Of a story, I am so amped that you decided to continue this series. I look forward for her sisters getting his brothers also :>)

I'm with ya...I normally love CM stories, this one is just too off the wall for me. I love me some alpha males, but throwing out 'mine' every other pg is just way too much for me, it cheapens the character and makes the story seem positively silly more than anything. The premise was great and the plot idea also, but the story being unfolded is lacking greatly. I can't finish this, I'll have to respectfully pass on this story.

But what a fucking dick to get fucked by! Mmmmmmhmmmmmm yes Mr Scott! LOL

He just needs to stop with all the macho bullshit and do what he has to do to make things right. They both want each other. I hope this has a happy ending.

Completely agree with @euphoriaslam