In War and Love Ch. 01

historical accuracy

British Rail had not come into existence during the second world war nor was there a "her majesty" - there was a king - George V1. Divisions in railway carriages were termed compartments and one sat on seats not chairs.

And if one were striving for historical accuracy

that all would be important. The situation chosen was close enough to allow a mood to be set. And the story so far was interesting, the characters somewhat believable, the characters revealing themselves through actions and dialog.

I like it.

Please continue.

A good start

A good start but the devil is in the details. As Anonymmous pointed out, British Rail didn't exist until well after WW2, Engines were steam, and had whistles. Coaches had compartments with bench seats, Some had corridors others more normally used on local lines had external doors to each compartment, and were not equipped with lavatory facilities. On trains during the war it is highly unlikely that anyone, doctor or not would get an empty compartment, unless it were first class. You have a good plotline but let it down in the accuracy of the peice.

That was great! Please write more!