If she's eighteen and not home schooled, there's a large possibility she knows what a cock is and knows about sex and probably has had it, especially if she had a date with the best football player, try and make her sound not so naive, but overall, it was a good story, your writing style is good and the plot is sound, good luck!
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Anonymous02/28/12
i liked it! i agree there should be more chapters. :)
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Anonymous07/12/12
sexy
oh daddy that was HOT i wish my daddy would take me like that i look foward to spankings because of this shit ima bad girl oh fuck this made me come soooo much
Daddy was so bad and naughty this morning, and then he had too many beers with lunch and fell asleep on the sofa! Naughty naughty! And look at this pee-pee, all dirty from being naughty this morning. Well we'll just have to cut it off with the ole butcher knife here and send it out to be dry-cleaned! Wow, daddy must have had a LOT of beer, he didn't even wake up! ...and he's being naughty again, look at all that blood he's getting all over the sofa and floor! I'll never get that all out!
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Anonymous05/12/15
Fail
The hymen is not located inside the vagina and plus not having a hymen doesnt mean you're not a virgin. The hymen can tear because of stretching or fingering roughly. Learn about the females body, you fucking idiot.
English
Is it warm in here?
I'm not usually into the non-consent incest stories, but it has been a slow and horny day so I thought I'd try one.
GLAD I DID!
Daddy
Keep up the good work
Great story, good start to your writing endeavors.
daddy has his way with his daughter
good start on the first of your stories now you can open up the scope of the new story. as i am shore there will be many more great writing
Beautiful
This was a very nice story, would love to read the second chapter soon.
Daddydoesher
Logical?
If she's eighteen and not home schooled, there's a large possibility she knows what a cock is and knows about sex and probably has had it, especially if she had a date with the best football player, try and make her sound not so naive, but overall, it was a good story, your writing style is good and the plot is sound, good luck!
i liked it! i agree there should be more chapters. :)
sexy
oh daddy that was HOT i wish my daddy would take me like that i look foward to spankings because of this shit ima bad girl oh fuck this made me come soooo much
So good
This story made my pussy soooo wet
So Wet
i was punished after prom but no like this i wish my daddy would have done that . i'm so wet right now that i had to fuck my didlo !!
His pee pee?
You are kidding, aren't you? His 'pee pee'????? Geezzzzzz
ok
okayyy, sure it was hot but maybe a little innocent.
anyway ur a good writer. well done
His pee pee?
You aren't serious?
Daddy was so bad and naughty this morning, and then he had too many beers with lunch and fell asleep on the sofa! Naughty naughty! And look at this pee-pee, all dirty from being naughty this morning. Well we'll just have to cut it off with the ole butcher knife here and send it out to be dry-cleaned! Wow, daddy must have had a LOT of beer, he didn't even wake up! ...and he's being naughty again, look at all that blood he's getting all over the sofa and floor! I'll never get that all out!
Fail
The hymen is not located inside the vagina and plus not having a hymen doesnt mean you're not a virgin. The hymen can tear because of stretching or fingering roughly. Learn about the females body, you fucking idiot.
nice
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