All Comments on 'The Angel and The Demon'

great story but i wish he hadn't died quite yet, more chapters would have been fabulous! Wonderful imagery and buildup though thankyou!

this could be a series or something. I love the double cross at the end. maybe you will be to make a series based on this story that would be awesome.

I like this:) really good work!

You should add more chapters and keep it going because it was awesome.

This is a very good story. Well written and amazingly compact. I know others are begging you to continue it. However, this is one that should end where it has. I would enjoy reading other similar stories. Not a continuation of this one but hmmm other stories in the same universe you are creating here.

continue this please :)

Hope there's more.

I loved this story!!! Great twist at the ending :)

I seriously loved the twist this one took in the end.

... and different.

I liked it.

I wish there would have been a sequel! Ugh they seemed so amazing! Like maybe he didn't die like he was supposed to and they were together.. Sadness.. But great story

I'd love for you to do a follow-up to this...maybe about her and the effect his words and what he pointed out had. Maybe she questions being an angel or goes to look for him, feeling badly for what she did. Anyhow, it was a great turn at the end, sad in some ways. It might've been fun to see how it would have gone had she not been a warrior. Enjoyed it alot!

Amazing, I love the turn of events at the end, totally unpredictable

To be honest it could've been a little bit of a longer story. You could've dragged it out a bit.

Wow, I was not expecting that. I thought about it as the story started and then I was like, 'Nah..' and then bam.. Wow. Great job. I loved it.