Was He Guilty? Ch. 01

Good first chapter

Of course, what you have basically is two flirts and a horn dog; and Jeff, who seems to be a bit "morality challenged" himself.
One point left unexplained is why they only had two days. By context, the obvious presumption is that Jeff is on death row, but it would have been nice to have that point clarified.
Looking forward to ch.02.

Good Opener as always

I admit that he does sound like he went off the deep end but as he pointed out he now had time to think about it.

Great opening.

Look forward to the rest of this novella...I love crime novels anyway, and your erotic crime story is off to a great start.

Interestingly, if one reads/watches crime novels and TV, it is surprising that there are people out there who really engage in these kinds of behaviors. Stealing ones spouse's money seems to be a pretty common motive in murders.

Good Start

A good start on establishing characters, waiting for the next episode

Ooookay

If DGHear's goal is to have Jeff come across as Moron .. a geek who is so clueless he thinks shit is a bowl of Honey...

BINGO... the author is off to a good start

Well I would think that if any man is that obsessed with another woman's tits he probably shouldn't be getting married in the first place. But for the sake of the story I'll try to ignore that.

Intrigued

I just finished reading Ch 1 - 4. Looking forward to the next chapter.

EVERYBODY HERE IS INNOCENT

except the guilty ones. TK U MLJ LV NV

Loving it

Trouble is brewing. Thanks for the offering.

Great Start

Sounds like a conspiracy to me. We'll see...

A good running start -

Do we kill him off in the end -

Not DG's style

EVERYBODY IS A STAR

even the no-talent ones. TK U MLJ LV NV