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Interstate

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by papagriz07/27/11

YOUR LEAD IN SUCKS

and the first paragraph of your story turns me off completely. Don't give up your day time job.

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by Anonymous07/28/11

Your lead in does not suck

I liked it. Gave you a 4 star. I won't blow sunshine up your skirt and say it was the best thing I've ever read, but it was definitely worth reading. Keep it up! :)

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