Revenge Gone Bad

Good story, mostly.....

Good story, in a slightly weird sort of way. Interesting "justification" for cheating, but the aftermath should be interesting.
[It would have been nice to know that there would a ch02.]
5-star.

Too cookbook

JPB's writing is usually good and this continues that tradition. But the theme is right out of the stupid cheating wives cookbook. Husband isn't really cheating but has "associates" around him that are setting him up. Wife sees manufactured "evidence". Wife doesn't really work it out with husband (she at least talks with him once, kudos). Wife works with associates (who have the most to gain by lying) to get info and get revenge. Wife finds out she was deceived. So far it's a painfully classic formula. It is a bit funny when she realizes that OF COURSE these guys would lie to get to fuck her. Duh! Then there is the "I'm NOT a slut" moment. Dearie, of course you are. You are fucking a bunch of guys and you are enjoying it. That's the definition for a slut.

Since there is going to be another chapter we can look forward to the wife's revenge against the jerks. That could be interesting. I hope it's really creative and vicious. And I hope that Frank kicks her ass out. A man that serially cheats on his wife does NOT love her. And a woman who serially cheats to get revenge does NOT love her husband. Frank turns out to be innocent. She is not.

It doesn't get any better

Than another JPB story. My conscience has kept my dick out of too many women to count, and at 71, I still have the same wife and a clear conscience. Ahh well, 'What might have been'. Great story, thanks.

There is not a bit of emotion in this story

...just like many JPB stories: excellent writing, but no love, no hate - nothing but fucking. And: the plot was predictable and without any suspense; "to the cookbook", as another reader expressed it.

goooood

Let's have the next Chapter real soon....there are so many ways you can go...but let's get Chad's baby involved in the divorce....Frank is a loser...let's not make him a wimp...Oh that's too much to ask of JPB....and I mean that in a good way!

Just finished reading chapter2 there is no divorce.

your slump

have you come out of it or are you just setting a clever trap. this one is better than many of your last efforts.

what revenge?

what revenge? the slut is busy fucking even after finding out the truth, no remorse. she is also carrying someone elses spawn, what a vindictive cunt! knowing jpb, the slut will be excused by the pathetic husband, guaranteed.

Shit!

SHIT and chapter 2 is less than shit! Why was ink wasted on crap like this?

Nicely built

with style even though they are the same old ideas we have seen in other stories. The big question is who will take what revenge on whom! Nice Work.

i hope the next part is better

Lets see what Frank does, and I hope she ends up with Jack and they contract Aids and die a painfull death. Lets see which way JPB goes.

Revenge?

Against Chad boy? He never pusher her to start.
Against Gloria? She never did anything to her.
Against the other cum donors? She eagerly went after them.
Against Frank? He did nothing except believe in her.
Against her parents for instilling stupidity. OK.
Against herself for being brain dead. Sure.
Lets see intelligent husband is stupid enough to bring home soiled evidence? No, not logical.
She asks pussy hounds to tell her a story about her husband and if its bad enough she will fuck them. Guaranteed to give her what ever it takes to fuck her, but not the truth.
She sounds like a Republican, fuck over everyone and blame someone else.

Was wondering where you were

Did not see a story from you for a while but now I know that you have been spending the time writing up a great one. Keep it up, great story and you did not fail to deliver

Good Stuff

JPB,

Excellent, as usual. The naysayers are gonna have their apolectic seizures, but it was very good.

Matt Moreau

ENGLISH!!

Rife with mistakes. And one NOD his head for yes and SHAKES his head for no.

An interesting story, and an erotic tale that is well told

Along with having a good storyline that has the wife being a slut to her husband's friends, but it didn't make me feel bad towards her for what she was doing to her husband.

Perhaps the husband character wasn't supposed to have any sympathy, and that's what made this reader feel more for the wife.

I'll be watching for the next chapter.

Thanks Bob, it's a good read.

Why?

Do you continue to swamp us with this drivel. Which woman took your testes? was it your mommy?

Good start

But the next chapter will make or break the story as a WACC or revenge story by the husband. Hoping for the latter

LOAD OF SHITE HOPE FRANK FINDS OUT SLITS THE SLUTS THROAT GETS A SHOTGUN SHOOTS THE REST .ME THINK U R A CUCKOLD FAGGOT JPB.REAL MEN DONT PUT UP WAE THIS SHITE

AND AFTER ALL THE SEX

what cums next for her. TK U MLJ LV NV

Nasty Story!!!!

I think I will go have a smoke! Thanks for sharing.

Just another

stupid cunt that doesn't have the brains to survive. She probably has head phones on telling her to breath in, breath out, breath in, breath out,... This story should be in the humor section. I haven't laughed this hard about somebody's stupidity since the old three stooges.

I won't..

Even bother with chapter 2. Knowing the way this story is leaning, the cheating cunt will get her revenge, and come out smelling of roses. Dumb hubby will either never find out about the slut, or he'll forgive her and raise some other guys kid. Slut wife will be happy to pass the baby off as his and will consider continuing to cheat. No divorce or justice for hubby.
If the other guy's spawn shreds her uterus in childbirth and hubby dumps her on the sidewalk let me know and I'll read it, but knowing cuck loving jpb, I won't hold my breath!

Sighs...

What a stupid cunt... she finds out she's being set up and rather that be remorseful, sad, heartbroken and angry, then she's continuing to spread her legs... It is cunts like this one, that give women a bad reputation!

666 was right

chapter 2 does have the cheating bitch getting off scott free I like some of jpb stories but this one not at all

A favor??????

The cheating slut wants a favor? Maybe a place to hide when Frank starts to kill everyone involved? JESUS what a stupid slut. Ever hear of talking to your husband? The one you supposedly love to death? What a dumb slut.

well

revenge cheating never ever helps, and only ensures a marriage/relationships destruction.

You wrote afetr she knew he didnt cheat, she continued her cheating.

Poor guy needs rid of her.

I am so sorry i read this

After reading this I have decided to never read anymore of this authors stories. I am done.

Don't continue, please

This plot is so DUMB and so OLD I coulnd't read more than one page. 0/5

Ugh

Close to your worst.