IF LIT EXECs READ THESE, WHY NOT WAIT FOR THE WHOLE STORY TO BE PUBLISHED. READERS MAY OR MAY NOT LIKE INDIVIDUAL CHAPTERS, BUT THEM NOT KNOWING THE OUTCOME MAY CHANGE OF ALTER THEIR VOTES. TK U MLJ LV NV
and it often does in DG hears stories. BUT.. as of the end of chapter 2... I am sot of glad he got fucked over. As a rule really REALLY clueless dumb as shit fuckwads like this guys really should not reproduce.
This CHUMP... an easy mark... has NO clue about women or people. None. He is weak and pathetic...
2 weeks before his wedding to his own smoking hot wife he sees Big tits -- his wife's best friend and he loses all control... NOT after 12 years. 2 weeks before he is married.
There are so many red flags going on here that is really hard to believe this wimp could be this god damn clueless.
so far this is reading like Bad version of one of JPB's stories.
Harry! Why do you read my stories? I think it's so you have a shouting board to read your own comments. There are three chapters left. Don't waste your time. Find something else to read that you might enjoy. I will continue writing what I like.You don't have to read them, you know what to expect from my stories by now.
For everyone else. Thanks for taking the time to comment. Story is finished and posted. Hopefully you can read a chapter the next couple of days.
With respect
DG Hear.
Hubby cheats and is forced to turn over wife on wedding night so the other hubby can get even. Stupid is as stupid does. And he still got a piece of Shauna. Now he's suspicious of the girls night out and is a bumbling amateur PI but nothing is happening. There's not enough there yet to understand this story. The only thing I know is that the hubby is a dope and I'm starting not to care about what happens to him.
DG, a different story from you for sure, but well enough to keep me waiting for the next chapter, let Harry say what he will you are still one of my favourite authors on LIT.
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Anonymous07/29/11
why didn't he jsut come clean?
i mean, he cheated while they were dating, bad but not unforgivable. If she cheated while she was married, then they should both come clean and make a fresh start of it otherwise, the secrets they carry will ruin their marriage.
Also, some serious editing needs to be done. quotation marks are used to denote conversation but you had them all over the place. Makes the story more confusing and less enjoyable.
English
Oh Boy!
Looking forward to chapter 3.
SO FAR SO GOOD
IF LIT EXECs READ THESE, WHY NOT WAIT FOR THE WHOLE STORY TO BE PUBLISHED. READERS MAY OR MAY NOT LIKE INDIVIDUAL CHAPTERS, BUT THEM NOT KNOWING THE OUTCOME MAY CHANGE OF ALTER THEIR VOTES. TK U MLJ LV NV
The story maybe over for some of us
He has been defined as a wimp..... Er,but he is a condemned killer..??? Obviously this is not one for those who can only see all black or all white...
Oh the cliffs are here too!
Ummmm Let's See
Brad knew Jeff had money so arranged with his girlfriend Darcy to set Jeff up for the murder of Shauna.
Think I saw this movie it was called Wild Things
well......
Interesting, and certainly an uncommon tale. Most definitely, I am looking forward to #03.
5-star
maybe this will chnge
and it often does in DG hears stories. BUT.. as of the end of chapter 2... I am sot of glad he got fucked over. As a rule really REALLY clueless dumb as shit fuckwads like this guys really should not reproduce.
This CHUMP... an easy mark... has NO clue about women or people. None. He is weak and pathetic...
2 weeks before his wedding to his own smoking hot wife he sees Big tits -- his wife's best friend and he loses all control... NOT after 12 years. 2 weeks before he is married.
There are so many red flags going on here that is really hard to believe this wimp could be this god damn clueless.
so far this is reading like Bad version of one of JPB's stories.
DG Hear
Harry! Why do you read my stories? I think it's so you have a shouting board to read your own comments. There are three chapters left. Don't waste your time. Find something else to read that you might enjoy. I will continue writing what I like.You don't have to read them, you know what to expect from my stories by now.
For everyone else. Thanks for taking the time to comment. Story is finished and posted. Hopefully you can read a chapter the next couple of days.
With respect
DG Hear.
Getting into it...
I feel a twist coming on. DG, you have my interest & I'm looking forward to the rest!
Too soon to tell
Hubby cheats and is forced to turn over wife on wedding night so the other hubby can get even. Stupid is as stupid does. And he still got a piece of Shauna. Now he's suspicious of the girls night out and is a bumbling amateur PI but nothing is happening. There's not enough there yet to understand this story. The only thing I know is that the hubby is a dope and I'm starting not to care about what happens to him.
Different
DG, a different story from you for sure, but well enough to keep me waiting for the next chapter, let Harry say what he will you are still one of my favourite authors on LIT.
why didn't he jsut come clean?
i mean, he cheated while they were dating, bad but not unforgivable. If she cheated while she was married, then they should both come clean and make a fresh start of it otherwise, the secrets they carry will ruin their marriage.
Also, some serious editing needs to be done. quotation marks are used to denote conversation but you had them all over the place. Makes the story more confusing and less enjoyable.
NOT PAYING STRICT ATTENTION
is not a crime, BUT it should be for some. TK U MLJ LV NV
Enjoying it
Thanks for the offering.
Hmmm....
Great series so far. But the question is, what the fuck happens next?
Does she or doesn't she LOL
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