Game Of Seduction

*****

Good first effort.

Five.

This could get very hot and a whole lots more erotic

greay first story you had my full attention in more ways than one . love the story and the awesome writing. game of suduction sounds about right . so you got me now wanting more of this very hot horny story.

Great Sotry

I love how kept the sexual chemistry going between Antonio and Angie but somehow just kept it as a tease. Cant wait till the second chapter! You said its your first story? Well good job!

Great Start

I did enjoy your story. I am a guy who can see myself in the place of Toni...except....I have a shaved head and not a ponytail! I look forward to reading more of your work! Good Job!

Excellent first story with lots of potential. Looking forward to some more as the sexual tension unfolds. Ken xx

Great start, hope to see more of this story line soon.

Thanks Guys !

Someone sent me feedback about Toni being head over heels in love with Angie and I wanted to clear that up. Antonio is not head over heels in love with her, he's intrigued by Angelina's shyness and beauty. In the next chapter you will learn more about Toni and Angie's background.

keep the Doctor ,

If that picture is you in the bio. section they can have the Doctor. You've got the doctor beat hands down and it's a great story so far keep up the good work and ciao Bella.

You're off to a promising start.

Great start

Titillating

The first good story I have read that wasn't all sex on the first page= just made me want to go on to Chapter 2

that picture is not juuicyyLadyy!!

That is Lea from the Bad Girls Club!!

i love the beginning this is well written

but i do want to caution you that the characters and back ground seem veriy similar to another story here on lit ( matthew and camille) circumstantial i am sure ( italian twin siblings, young niece , professional woman (both drs different specialties), female twin is older and owns an Italian diner) I hope these end up being the only similarities because your story is so well written that i want to read more.