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It's Only Fair

byKimberlyFitz©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/29/11

Nice Start

Nice Start. Would love to seem more of this story.

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by Saxon_Hart07/29/11

wishes

I wish I had a sister like that.....minus the ball crushing that is.

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by Anonymous07/29/11

yet another waste

way to unrealistic for me noone goes from being that mad at someone to loving them in hours in this case probably never especially since it has been going on for years.

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by Anonymous07/29/11

some good parts

A good start but went a bit too far. You have good insight and can easily set up a real situation. Be observant and the situation will develop.

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by Anonymous01/04/12

stupid

she stomps on the guys nuts and the mom doesn't rush him to the hdoctor or hospital and doesn't punish the daughter total bullshit. they hate each other and always fight yet we are suposed to believe that suddenly they forget and love each other bullshit no way in hell he would forgive her. no guy that had his balls stomped on is going to be able to fuck that day lucky if he can in two or three days again bullshit. do some research and then do a rewrite using a good editor. the brother sounds about twelve not the needed eighteenbest to delete this before you get banned for posting underage sex

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A bit of acne to add realism is one thing, constant references to "oily skin" "pus-filled zits" and so on, is too much!

Are you trying to add realism or induce nausea?

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by camr465602/03/14

How about some more of this story?

You are a good writer and it made me hard. Good for you, good for me. Please write some more. Thank you.

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by Anonymous12/06/14

it is nice

to read a story written by a woman gives a better perspective, thanks
4yourpleasureiam

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by Anonymous05/17/16

Anal

Wonder if she had anal beeds lol

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by Anonymous06/08/17

Total Shit

Hope it was covered in it

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