All Comments on 'It's Only Fair'

by KimberlyFitz

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice Start

Nice Start. Would love to seem more of this story.

Saxon_HartSaxon_Hartover 12 years ago
wishes

I wish I had a sister like that.....minus the ball crushing that is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
yet another waste

way to unrealistic for me noone goes from being that mad at someone to loving them in hours in this case probably never especially since it has been going on for years.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
some good parts

A good start but went a bit too far. You have good insight and can easily set up a real situation. Be observant and the situation will develop.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
stupid

she stomps on the guys nuts and the mom doesn't rush him to the hdoctor or hospital and doesn't punish the daughter total bullshit. they hate each other and always fight yet we are suposed to believe that suddenly they forget and love each other bullshit no way in hell he would forgive her. no guy that had his balls stomped on is going to be able to fuck that day lucky if he can in two or three days again bullshit. do some research and then do a rewrite using a good editor. the brother sounds about twelve not the needed eighteenbest to delete this before you get banned for posting underage sex

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 10 years ago
A bit of acne to add realism is one thing, constant references to "oily skin" "pus-filled zits" and so on, is too much!

Are you trying to add realism or induce nausea?

camr4656camr4656about 10 years ago
How about some more of this story?

You are a good writer and it made me hard. Good for you, good for me. Please write some more. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
it is nice

to read a story written by a woman gives a better perspective, thanks

4yourpleasureiam

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Anal

Wonder if she had anal beeds lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Total Shit

Hope it was covered in it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
So shit

Crap. 1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
All in the family

Would have given 5 if mom had joined in.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Terrible

Poor spelling, terrible language use from the beginning.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

He's an asshole, pun intended.

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