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Passion Ch. 01

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by mBrow08/24/11

Hot and wild

Yes, quite a hot session there, and I'm intrigued to follow developments and learn more about the characters. The writing looked good grammatically, too.

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by Thor9909/24/11

Great story!

This was brilliant. Hot and well-written. Keep it up!!

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by Anonymous11/13/16

Is this a parody?

... or was it written by a 14 year old?

"Cummed" is why I never write 'cum' as anything other than a noun. It's a ridiculous word.

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