Jennifer Playing

Fan-fucking-tastic!

Damn, that was so hot! Jennifer, I would love to be your Steve anyday!

Excellent story

This is superb and well written. I especially enjoyed the

This has long been a fantasy of mine to either be Michael and see my wife play Jenny's part, or be Steve and have a horny wife of a couple playing the same game join me for some fun in my truck in the parking lot. I enjoyed reading your version of my fantasy; perhaps there is the opportunity for a Part 2?

Liked It

Nice build up. Waiting for ch 2.

good start

enjoyed this bit hope chapter 2 continues in the same vain

Trash JPB clone

Run of the mill cheating bitch story. Puke.

Great first chapter.

Love how it's a spontaneous encounter that they're involved with. I was hoping for the story to be carried out to the ending but now you definately have my attention for chapter 2.

expected a lot

..n was horny.. bt u cheated

Nice start

Definitely liked the flirting action and how it progressed. How to see another chapter or along something of the same lines.

just a straight formula

gutter slut cheats on boy friend/husband
boy friend/husband wanks in corner saying how sexy she is
she and everybody laugh at boy friend/husband
Yawn. Yawn.
next time finish the stupid story
p.s. JPB can crank out more in week that are at least somewhat different then the standard formula then you will in a year
Just quite and go tell your wife she looks cute with 4 other men fucking her.

Right out of

Right out of the dumpster, whore girlfriend, fag boyfriend. No loving wife, as a matter of fact, no wife at all.

Regular Event

If they don't do this very often, then it's erotic. If, however, this was a first - Michael now is a wimp, a cuck, a loser and/or - he isn't there when she comes back in!

1 star

Another wimp cuckold and whore story. If the boyfriend had any self respect he would leave the bitch.

This description of "teasing" reaches new heights in stupidity....

...but I see it thrilled the cuck crowd.How about a chapter two where Mikey reveals to this punta nina that Steve is a co-worker who he sold his current fuck pig (her)to. And then he splits the money with her, just before leaving to find a new fuck-pig. Cause what the hell, fairs fair in junior high.

Pretty interesting

You have a pretty good way of sliding through your story...all of the right stuff to give a good picture of what is going on. Could use a little more background scenario, like little stuff going on around the bar...etc., but the bartender is a good bit. Maybe a little more information of what her physical aspects are....all of them. Really enjoyed it though.

Are there any men left?

Or just little cuck fag boys, really sick shit kids.

Nice Bit!

Chapter Two?

Typical

Typical whore fodder. Jenny you sound like a small tittied slut. The story started hot but then you whored it up way too quickly like little slutty whores usually do. Sp next chapter he fucks you in his truck cums in you making you pregnant then dumps you ib an ally dumpster like the gutter slut whore thst you are.

Hot story. You sound sexy and hot and I wish I had a hot liberated wife like you. I don't get all the hate comments coming your way.

AWESOME

Fantastic start of a great story. I am soooo HARD just reading the story.

Don't understand the haters . . .

I think it's a hot fantasy, likewise got hard reading it. I suspect that the bad comments are made by really insecure guys who would be insanely jealous in this scenario. Oh well!

Loved It

Loved your new story. Just enough teasing to keep us interested. I have had a similar situation happen to me in a hotel at the DFW airport Hyatt. I still get hard thinking about it. Thanks for bringing back the memories.

Buctny8

Is Michael an idiot? His girlfriend is heading off with another guy and won't be back till he's fucked her. What is it with these impotent jerks?

Hot, Enjoyable - BUT

I wouldn't be there when she came back in.

Gone, long gone - never to return.

Hot story though, Thanks!

Jenny sounds like a snob. A sexy snob though. For letting this little scenario of hers progress as she did though, I hope when the guy gets her out to his truck he pounds her relentlessly a fills her slut hole with all his cum, punishing that wanker bf Michael, by impregnating his slut snob.

oh boy

is she gonna get pounded hard. 4*

Great tease! Sometimes the foreplay is erotic enough

Great story.
Well written.
All the details without getting bogged down in minutia.
The best thing about a story like this is we get to imagine what happened next.
Filling in the blanks for us would probably ruin it for me.
We both enjoyed it. A lot!