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A Case of the Chicken Pox

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by Anonymous07/31/11

A good start to more

and it got my dick hard. Would like to see where this story could develop into deeper relationship between the two.

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by Phantom192507/31/11

Excellent!

For a first time effort this was outstanding,simple & short with a believable storyline.

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by Anonymous07/31/11

Ughh............ sex with chicken pox girl ?????????

so disgusting

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by jdbjd12/02/11

Fantastic First Story !

Having had an older sister, I particularly enjoy the deviation from the story line of the older brother taking advantage of his young sister. Congratulations are in order for such a hot, first time story! Even though it has been nearly forty years past, the imagery created by your story had me erect and gasping as my sister drove her bigger, softer cheeks back engulfing the full length of my throbbing dick. Wonderful ...... THANK YOU !!!

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by Anonymous09/05/12

rushed

he gave in way to easily and way to fast you gave no indication they ever had feelings for each other before so what happened here should be spread out over days or weeks not hours.

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by Anonymous10/17/12

Interesting

I hope there's going to be a sequel

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