Sometimes we get caught up and critical about punctuation, grammar, story line, believability, etc...
Not so here! That was a hot frenzy of unexpected animal lust and carnal desire that is as believable as can be. I loved every word and I only wish ... mmm
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Anonymous08/05/11
Hot
I wish my daddy would've done that!! My brother did but not daddy!!! :)
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Anonymous08/23/11
Wow!
That was amazing. I read and re-read while having multiple O's. Beautifully written.
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Anonymous10/03/11
Talented!
Such a beautiful and delicate story, i completely believed it, a really enjoyable read 5*
This story is so awesome! Any more chapters to come?
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Anonymous07/28/12
My fav fantasy
I have wanted to seduce my stepdad and get preggo by him too. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com hit me up daddy. I won't tell anyone except my bi gf brit. Lol
English
Very quick, very impressive!
Not much more I can say than that.
HOT HOT HOT!
Sometimes we get caught up and critical about punctuation, grammar, story line, believability, etc...
Not so here! That was a hot frenzy of unexpected animal lust and carnal desire that is as believable as can be. I loved every word and I only wish ... mmm
Hot
I wish my daddy would've done that!! My brother did but not daddy!!! :)
Wow!
That was amazing. I read and re-read while having multiple O's. Beautifully written.
Talented!
Such a beautiful and delicate story, i completely believed it, a really enjoyable read 5*
a MUST read story!!!!
.... in the moment from the first line- spell binding writing!!! I can't wait to read more form you audraleigh.
Regards
Jeeper3
wow
This story is so awesome! Any more chapters to come?
My fav fantasy
I have wanted to seduce my stepdad and get preggo by him too. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com hit me up daddy. I won't tell anyone except my bi gf brit. Lol
Very f'ing HOT!
This is a favorite fantasy of mine .... got me hard - and kept me that way throughout.
:)
Made me hit the Big O
This was amazing. I came multiple times. Excellent writing and I love your other story too. Keep up the good work!
Love the pace!
Nice build and nice climax!
Wow!
I've read & re-read this a few times and I always enjoy it.
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