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Homelands Pt. 01 Ch. 09

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by Anonymous08/07/11

At the start, when there were some repetitive sequences in the chapters, I was thinking, ah, just another series that you read for a few days, then you quit.
But now it's different, a real story that makes you open Literotica just to look for the next chapter.
Thank you for the good read

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by digdaddyrich08/07/11

It reads as if Frank has a lot to learn yet.

I'm pulling for Frank to be able to topple Brie from her throne, but he has a lot to learn yet.

A good chapter, and a good read, thanks.

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by jdnunyer08/07/11

Thanks for the comments, guys. I appreciate your interest.

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