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Dear Dr Zamboni

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by SweetOblivion07/30/11

Excellent as ever

Another gem - brilliant. SO

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by Anonymous08/01/11

*****

Five.

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by Fish_Tales08/01/11

Insight

Your eloquence in describing the condition is impressive. "Fruit caught rotting reluctantly in time lapse sequence" would resonate with anyone who has come into contact with this disease. Sensitive.

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by twelveoone10/20/12

5ed

Once acquiescent infantry,
...
refusing their accepted duties.
is absent without leave
...
I don't expect my legs to report
for duty once more
tied in nicely

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