All Comments on 'Satisfying Wife's Fantasy'

There's just not much to it to get aroused by. It's over before it started. It'd be much more erotic if there was some character development and explanation about how this couple arrived in this situation. More details are needed. How'd this woman come to be seated at your table? What's the point of describing what your wife is wearing in the first paragraph? It has no bearing on the story. And the writing in the present tense hurts it, not to mention the very first sentence is really bad grammar.

At a minimum, run the spelling and grammar check in your word processor. Better yet, get and editor.

Could you please fuck wy horny wife as well?

I really liked this story. Present tense speaks to me, and I appreciate the brevity, and that there's not a lot of backstory. I'm a fan of the short stories, and the ones that are mostly dialogue. Thanks!