All Comments on 'The Crusader Ch. 02'

was another great story i really enjoyed both chapters thank you for posting it and i look forward to your next story

promising start, but weak ending... could have been better...

Wmo,

Looking forward to Dr. Jessica letting her hair down and helping Rollie heal, naturally.

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

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Basically no surprises. Sort of like a Western in its straightforwardness...

I liked the story. It could have used a little more detail about Jessica, but overall, there was nothing there which detracted from the plot. Good work!

Woody. Thanks for one more very good story!

Woodman You blew me away again What a story. We now know you are a great author no mater what the venue. Thans for this story.

Great story line. Characters have a great deal of depth and complexity. looking forward to reading more. Please don't make us wait too long.

You could write a story about watching paint dry and make it good. You just keep writing and I will keep enjoying reading them all as I have so far.

when i see a story with the name woodmanone i know it will be awesome.I have read all your stories here.I have not been disappointed yet. just keep writing. thanks.

Awesome Story. Please keep up the series.

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Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

That was great!!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️