The Crusader Ch. 02

great story

was another great story i really enjoyed both chapters thank you for posting it and i look forward to your next story

promising start, but weak ending... could have been better...

Huh? I think I read the third page of this story. ... Be right back.- - - Seems I like it.

Wmo,

Looking forward to Dr. Jessica letting her hair down and helping Rollie heal, naturally.

Thanks for sharing on Lit.


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Good Story

Basically no surprises. Sort of like a Western in its straightforwardness...

Nice Work!

I liked the story. It could have used a little more detail about Jessica, but overall, there was nothing there which detracted from the plot. Good work!

Consistant, You Are,

Woody. Thanks for one more very good story!

Out of five stars this was a NINE

Woodman You blew me away again What a story. We now know you are a great author no mater what the venue. Thans for this story.

Great story line. Characters have a great deal of depth and complexity. looking forward to reading more. Please don't make us wait too long.

Great as usual

You could write a story about watching paint dry and make it good. You just keep writing and I will keep enjoying reading them all as I have so far.

awesome

when i see a story with the name woodmanone i know it will be awesome.I have read all your stories here.I have not been disappointed yet. just keep writing. thanks.

Awesome Story. Please keep up the series.

UNDERCOVER AND OVER WORKED

but still hitting on the ladies.. TK U MLJ LV NV

SEARCHING FOR THE HOLY GRAIL

or trying to apprehend a criminal. TK U MLJ LV NV

crusader 02

Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

crusader 02 2nd time

Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com