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All Comments on 'Used Ponygirl Dealer'

by Boxlicker101

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bondagescholarbondagescholaralmost 12 years ago
Really excellent ponygirl story.

Great dystopian premise - this story helped inspire my imagination. I hope you write more ponygirl stories.

Rapier875Rapier875about 4 years ago
Too hurried.

Not enough detail, all too high level.

Not much action, all a bit 'bland'.

Nice topic, but the story was badly planned.

Sorry for being a misery..........

Rapier

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