All Comments on 'Beauty and the Geek Ch. 02'

Thank you realy enjoyed this

I have read several of your stories and have found them so believable that I was caught up in the emotions of the characters. You have a fantastic way of making a story so real that one could almost imagine it really happening. I hope to see more stories from you.

I normally don't get into "Celebrity" stories, and wouldn't have read the second half had I not read the first half. Glad I did! While I had to suspend my disbelief to read, it was well worth while. A very enjoyable diversion. Thank you.

Jerry

i love the story that's all I can say I love the story!

I rather liked the first part, a guy who brings a girl out of her shell by their related passion for music. It was very good, but this one was disappointing. I feel as though you took the story in too big of a different direction, making it something that it wasnt. It would have been nice to see how they grow in love and make their music group a big hit on their own. It would seem more realistic that way in my opinion.

Totally out of nowhere. Despise all the bowing and curtsying. Who do they think they are, Donald Trump?

That was nice. Good to see good works gain proper reward.

The second inline royals would have a very large security force around them when they go out even when incognito. Also they wouldn’t be shopping in low income areas!

@ Anon. 07/24/18: Of course it’s not realistic. It’s fiction, on Literotica, of all places. But it was still very entertaining. At least it was to me.

Very enjoyable story, I suppose it was even better for an Englishman. I certainly did not see that twist coming.