All Comments on 'Slightly, Once Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wonderful Story

The author takes us from meeting in high school, to dating, to making love, to truly caring for each other, to the usual end of high school relationships - the college decision. Here,the characters may go on to college together. I would suggest that more than one more chapter is needed to fully explore these two wonderful characters. Please go on with the story. It is beautifully told

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