by doug676676
I'm reading this late. I guess it slipped by Me back in August. Nicely written, especially with staying with telling the story and letting the reader be the victim. I don't know what the other jerk was commenting about. Maybe he didn't see the subject matter. He must have been commenting on the morality of the subject and not the writing. Stick to the Bible there Triple P. PistonPackingPete should have picked 3 other "P" words to describe himself.... maybe PunyPukingPussy.
4 stars
Intrigued by this story, read it and was increasingly turned on.. wetter and wetter as I read x this is one of my ultimate masturbation fantasies out of so many, but my name as the female, then the 'green eyes' reference.. god! could have been custom written for me x x x