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14 Days To Redemption Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/02/11

fantastic yet again

Loved it, can't wait to see how poor little Kelli reacts when Jack really pushes her. How I would love to find my Jack to take control. WOuld love to read more. x

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by Anonymous08/03/11

Another Good One

Looks like it will be a long hard 14 days ! Brilliant story

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by kiwiplum09/08/11

but...

not sure how she reconciles her uptight christian beliefs with having an affair? That's the only bit that doesn't seem to ring true. Otherwise good going.

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by Anonymous03/18/12

More

Keep it going. The bitch needs to learn what is real...

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by missgiter06/20/12

Wow...

Wow, I can't wait to read more. This was... well, plainly put.. HOT. Can't wait to see what Jack has in store for little Kelli
-a

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by Anonymous07/15/13

horahhh

Loving it so far

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by Anonymous12/09/13

If it's not in the Bible?

So, no tv, no car, no flying? That ruling is so absurd. As for God is watching, yes he is, with pleasure as we enjoy his creative skills in the bodies he gave us.

Part of enjoying God is enjoying what he has given.

God's prohibitions are of things like adultery,theft, assault that harm ourselves and /or other people,

By the way 'pins and needles' are the body's way of telling us to move in order to avoid ,possibly fatal, thrombosis. So insisting on immobility could kill, unlikely, but how would you feel if that was the result of your actions?

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by Anonymous01/16/15

Oh Yeah

God this made me so hard

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by Anonymous12/17/15

Fucking hot

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by JudyLee05/28/16

Next level.

She seems to be capitulating easily. I'm sure spanking her lets him release some of his anger over the last 7 years. A little pain during sex. Orgasm deprivation. Humiliation about her folks. I wonder if he really told them that. He has really thought this through.

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