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Kita'thalla Ch. 12

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by Anonymous

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thank you very much for the chapter, Bowoodstock. this is definitely one of the best stories on lit.

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by Anonymous08/02/11

Welcome back.

I was ready to give up, but I kept hope that you would return and by god, you did. Your story or Kitathalla are some of the best I have read. Thank you, my friend. I hope that you passed your classes with flying colors. David K. SteeleWhirlWnd.

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by Nightimevisions08/02/11

Welcome back!

I am sooo glad that you were able to come back and give us another great chapter. I hope that we get to see more from you a bit quicker, but RL has to be taken into account.

Welcome back and keep up the great work.

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by chrito7408/02/11

I never lost hope Been waiting for this for some time and it was awesome cant wait for more

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by noircat30208/02/11

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its back its back ITS BACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK YESSSSSSSSSSs

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by Anonymous08/02/11

Sweeeeettttt

For sure, school can be a drag and I know that it's hard to really find inspiration amid all that crap. But I knew you'd pull through eventually and I'm not dissappointed! Really great chapter as usual and looking forward to more! (No pressure, of course)

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by packanimals08/02/11

All Right!

I was not sure that this was ever going to end, which would be a shame that it didn't. The chapter did not disappoint and was worth the wait.

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by Scurvydog4403508/02/11

Hope

I like so many have looked forward to the next chapter in this saga. I hope that they admit their attraction to each other and love. I would like to see this story develop to the point where they are found after they loved each other and start interracial talks and peace. Some hot human and cat sex would be nice too. I love your two main characters.

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by SpeedySP08/02/11

Glad you're back!

Thankful that you're continuing this story. You're doing a nice job of building suspense, and the backstory was nicely delivered. Write more soon.

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by Anonymous08/02/11

WWWOOOO-HHHOOOO

Yeah, you're back. Did summer school once, some of the profs really lay it on. Guess they feel if they got to endure so do you.
Look forward to more chapters and stories from you in the future. Best of luck in school.

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by Lien_Geller08/02/11

Brilliant As Usual!

Great stuff again Bo. I was glad to see the flashback didn't outstay its welcome. Don't get me wrong, it was good stuff but I think this series definitely works best when the two leads are interacting. It's nice to see them finding out about their worlds from each other.

Very much looking forward to seeing what happens next and I hope life releases you from its many burdens and pleasant distractions to let ya write more soon!

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by caveape08/02/11

All you had to do was ask the readers If taking summer school was a good idea. A rule of thumb is never take a corse under 3 credit hrs unless you are willing to spend a lot of time and effert on it. The more credit hrs the corse the better your time and study is. Note I did not say easy!! On to this chapter!! It is well writen, your time and effort was not a wast of time and effort of your valueable time in school. Keep it up you write it I will read it.

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by 13enster08/02/11

Welcome back!

I am so happy to see a new chapter. It's too bad that school has been keeping you so busy, but school has to take priority. Anyway, welcome back and best wishes!

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by hveminem08/02/11

Simply great

This is one of the best stories i've read in here. Keep'em coming, can't wait!!

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by Kansascript08/02/11

About bloody D%&* TIME man!!!

SO glad that you are back and with a new chapter at that!!!! No matter how bad some people gripe R.L. must come first but still THANKS for the new chapter!!! Now don't scare us like that again PLEASE! Far to many spectacular stories on this site go unfinished.

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by Anonymous08/02/11

fantastic :-D

wonderful that you are continuing the story *S*

now I'll dig out my saved copy, re-read it ... then read this new chapter :-)

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by Anonymous08/02/11

Thank you.

I could not beleve my eyes, when I read the name of the story. Thanks again, and please do cont. with this story...IT IS WONDERFUL. Seattle WA

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by Anonymous08/02/11

Please continue

Great story line. Please continue and bring a conclusion at some point.

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by livingescapist08/03/11

Another great chapter

Glad to see you back after the trials and tribulations of school. As usual, this is another great chapter; I'm always surprised and delighted at how you continue to develop the characters, delve even deeper into what makes them tick, and build the relationship between Kita and Eric. Even the setbacks, so often contrived and transparent in traditional romance novels, feel genuine and organic in this one. You're a great write, and thank you for sharing this with us. May life permit you to continue the story for us soon.

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by Anonymous08/03/11

So glad you're back

Very true that summer school is a lot harder than a regular semester; it is very fast paced. I took two 3 credit classes one summer and the workload felt like a full 15 credit regular semester.

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by Anonymous08/03/11

Thank you

Thank you.... Thank you....Thank you.
I have been hanging out for this..... BRILLIANT

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by Anonymous08/03/11

At last

This series has taken on an almost supernatural feeling because of the wait. I have to check a few times to make sure it's real when I see a new one. And I'll have to reread the story shortly to remind myself of the plot. But damn. Thanks for posting. Keep cranking it out, don't make this the erotic version of detox.

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by FantasticJack08/03/11

Arrrrg!

It's so great that you're back...it's also a reminder of how maddeningly frustrated I feel at the end of each chapter! Just as I really get into things, the chapter ends and I have to just wait for the next one. And as so few stories hold my attention, this is a very big complement my friend. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous08/03/11

HOORAY !!!!!

Worth the wait. (But try not to take as long for the next chapter)

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by Kman408/03/11

Thanks!

Wow.. Thanks very much for finding the time in an obviously busy life to write another chapter.
This is an amazing story, and I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings.. but I'll wait as long as I have to if it means you keep writing such a good read. Quality is always better than quantity!

Work hard in school, and follow your dreams.. you have a real gift for creating and telling a story no matter what else you do in life!

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by saintmartin19908/03/11

FINALLY, Bowoodstock has come back to literotica!!

Been looking forward to reading new parts of Kita'thalla. The story is really good and I hope you can keep up the good work. P.S I feel the same way about summer school too.

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by Anonymous08/03/11

Woooooooohooooooooo

You are back! Half a year without so much as a single bleep and now you're back good as before. Way to go, man. Hoping for more soon.

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by Edwarus08/03/11

yay

bout time i was worried you'd never post again keep the chapters rollin love your story

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by frosty_hore808/04/11

danke, merci, gracias, σας ευχαριστούμε, ありがとう

well worth the wait.

just had to re-read the whole series, oh dear poor me!
enjoyed it as much the second time around.

wishing you well in all you future endeavours ;0)

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by cantfightfate08/05/11

Good update

but I hope you can update more frequently in the future.

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by Flpanther08/05/11

More

Almost deleted you from my favorite list, glad you finally go to it.

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by Anonymous08/05/11

birthday

today is my 64th birthday. I expect a present. Tonight I want the next chapter. Please...

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by illuminati128308/06/11

AWESOME!!

I too, just HAD to re-read the entire story just to make sure I remembered everything and it was better than the first two times I read it! I'm SO glad you got another one out and hope that life isn't too busy to keep you from getting more out soon. That's not selfish is it?

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by Anonymous08/07/11

Great to have you back.

Almost gave up on you like many others BUT am VERY happy to read the this latest chapter.
Interesting transition from Ch-11 to Ch-12.
I had originally thought Ch-11 a bit odd as there was no transition to it (at least none that I noticed) so it just kind of 'hung' out there for 9 months without any reference to the story line of the 1st 10 chapters.
But it was a good 'save' in the beginning of this Ch-12 to make it as part of a story being told to Eric by "K" after the fight with Turvan.
Anyway thanks for continuing and I look forward to more chapters (soon?)
Frank

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by Anonymous08/07/11

beautiful

beatiful

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by Anonymous08/07/11

Amazing

Im not just commenting on this Chapter but on the whole story alltogether. And i must say its very very good, i sincerly hope that you will keep it up and that there will be many more parts to come.

SO thank you for providing me with such an amesome series!

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by Anonymous08/09/11

Yeeesssss!

I had started to worry that something had happened to you. I agree with everyone else. Welcome back and great chapter. Can't wait for more. Please.

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A most welcome update!

Hazah! What wonderful news to see an update! I'm pleased to see my patience wasn't without merit.

I know what a pain it can be when school (and life) eats up all your available time, which makes something like writing for fun a luxury when eating, sleeping, school, work (with or without socializing) are necessities for success (and they're are only so many hours in the day and days in a week). That said, I'm glad you've not abandoned this truly wonderful bit of SciFi goodness. Indeed, you've created a wonderful and engaging world.

All that said, as much as I'm rooting for our couple I can't help but root for Kita more. With the hardships, indignities and suffering she's endured for herself, her family and her honor I can't help but hope she gets her revenge on the cocksucking weasels and backstabbers who've fucked her and her family over. I WANT BLOOD!

Indeed, even more than our couple getting together I wish Kita has the last laugh over her enemies (may they rot hell).

Thank you for the pleasure of reading another chapter. I hope I have that honor again in the not so distant future.

Cheers!

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by Hawkmoon808/09/11

Great read

Thank you for the story. This series is one of the best ones I have read. It will end up on my "look for updates every week" list:).

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by 08/10/11

Spellbound

This is absolutely amazing! Unique and well-written-school be damned! You are a writer...please update again soon! JV

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How?

I'm a bit sceptical of your excuse. How the hell can you be a writer this amazing and still get bad grades, not to mention give a damn about school? You have to realize that had you decided to write this to the finish and then given it out as a book you would've had it made? It would've been adapted into movies, perhaps the first sci fi erotic movie to be a major hollywood production?

Either way, I've been checking for updates once every week since chapter nine, and I absolutely adore it. I advice friends to read it and try to learn from it.

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by Lunaravirs08/12/11

wonderful!

I read all 12 chapters in one night, can't wait for the next installment. Such a change from what I'm usually reading. The way you describe things really makes you feel like you're there.

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by Et2bruttus08/12/11

Love it!

Hey,

I've been following this story from the very beginning and it never ceases to amaze me. I love the relationship between Kita and Eric and how Kita seemed to be bordering on professing her feelings for him in this chapter but was still hesitant to. Still, Eric (and me) reconciled what could happen if and when they are eventually found. I hope things will somehow work out for them when that does happen.

Anyways, great read as always. By far my favorite series on this site!

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by Et2bruttus08/17/11

Even better!

I spent much of last night reading through the first 12 chapters again to pick up on things that I may have missed the first time around and it was even more epic the 2nd time reading it. I'm being dead serious when I say that this should be made into a movie. Anyway, don't give up on this story, no matter how long it takes. I love reading it and desperately want to know what happens next!

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by aeg0608/18/11

more to come

its good to see that you are continuing the story arc. I was afraid that it was going to die. I hope that your schedule is not to overly stressful to keep you from writing more.

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by Anonymous08/18/11

OMG!!!

Wow! What a great series! I really, really hope you don't make me wait too long for the next chapter. Keep up the terrific writing.

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by Anonymous08/19/11

glad to know your back

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by Wait_and_Bleed08/23/11

Simply amazing.

This story is so enriching and I love it! Also, things seem to be heating up between the two characters and their boiling "mating urges." Maybe in a few more chapters we'll be seeing something like this happening:

http://ychan.ca/r/male+human+female+furry/73316

(Not my pic fyi, all due credit goes to its artist. I do praise whoever did make this pic.)

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by Anonymous08/25/11

Sequel?

Is this the end of the story or will it go on? I feel like there is a lot of stuff that still needs to be adressed before Im completely happy with this story. Otherwise, great work, you should be proud

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by arelative08/25/11

well written story, really looking forward to the next chapter

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