All Comments on 'My First Bathroom Incident'

oh man, I could visualize the entire scene like a fly on the wall. love piss play and am glad to see a fellow pee lover contributing to this site. can't wait for his reaction when she tells him what she did!

2hot2quibble.

A well written and evocative piece of erotica with strong descriptive writing.

But what I want to know is how much research the author did before writing this story?

quibble, that is. This story is so hot I must quibble. Of course, via "Send Feedback." Really super, a watersports classic.

Not really my thing but it was well written and the authors insight was interesting. I gave you all 5 stars. You done good girl. Keep writing.

Mike

*Warning! Warning! Author ranting about the wheres, whys and hows of her story! Read at your own risk!*

I have never had a story stimulate so many comments (here and via feedback) so very quickly... And all positive! What a shock.

Several have asked what kind of "research" I did for this story. Well... It's actually just a written account of a true event that happened no more than two weeks ago. Moment by moment, act by act, thought by thought it's virtually 100% true. The only deviation from real life is possibly a very subtle altering of her/my attitude.

I have a friend online who is VERY into and experienced with watersports. It had never been a kink of mine but also not a limit at all. Pee doesn't gross me out but it had never turned me on either. What *is* a kink and a huge turn on for me is seeing, hearing, feeling my partner's arousal, even if what is turning them on isn't a thing for me. This is the underlying, if rarely revealed, theme behind many of my stories and it's why I did what I did in the first place and very soon after why I wrote about it.

All that said, something interesting happened in getting it all on paper... for the first time, the process of writing a story actually started effecting my own thoughts and feelings on the event. Usually I would describe my stories as exploratory generally and cathartic at best. Creating the piece doesn't materially change my thoughts and feelings on the subject matter. No so with this one. Writing it out was a *very* arousing process and getting it all out made the acts hotter in retrospect than they were at the time. Hence "viturally 100% true" rather than 100% true. The post-act hotness effect definitely leaked through into the story.

So, is pee now a kink for me? I don't know. I can say that it's something that I'm more willing to explore than I ever was before. Only time will tell.

L

I like scat and piss together. There's a story here where the hubby (useless jerk) is having numeral affairs behind his wifes back with his very little dick (I littlle surprising, lol) and the wife has a piss and scat fetish. She gets a friend to help her retrain the useless hubby to be her toilet slave, but unfortunatly the lady never finished the story. That would have been good. Getting bigger men to use his useless mouth and ass with their cock,was good to read about. You seem to be pretty good hopefully you'llwrite more, good read hon and thanks.

Obviously detail is your strong suit! I was expected a two person scene. Still a very erotic story the way her intensity ratchets up.

I have a giant fetish for piss and girl this story drove me to the edge I know I'm a guy but you .....wow i cant describe it im speechless this is fantastic

That was really interesting! Thank you for writing this.