All Comments on 'Her Wedding Surprise'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Incomplete

Insufficient story set-up, no character description of the groom, no definition of the housemaid's relationship with the groom... for starters

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I liked it. I like how forceful he was

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