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by wildsweetone01/30/06

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i found this poem through the spinner - i'm glad i read and re-read your writing. it was worth my time. i liked the different font (it was unexpected) and i liked the images your well chosen words gave me. thank you.
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by LeBroz12/17/06

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A depressing feel of a long night at work.

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by duddle14612/17/06

lifelike

Through the word images one can almost see a deserted parking lot the guards watching TV or napping. Very true to life.

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