All Comments on 'A True Slut's Education Ch. 01'

The description of Louise'e feelings was very well done.

thanks vmp! I admit I am a comment whore, I love feedback on my writing - especially positive of course but creative criticism is accepted too x

great story, well written, very descriptive and HOTT! I too am a feedback whore and crave comments from readers of my stories, and you thoroughly earned this one my friend! I am already waiting for the next segment in this saga. keep up the good work!

made me eager to see what happens next--and your profile taught me a word--tittivate--which I plan to try to use as often as I can, since it has a nice ring.

Thank you for sharing this fascinating story, and I look forward to wherever it's going.

Very well written. Too often stories on this site have no build up. This story was well developed. Like the others, I look forward to the next chapters. Well done.

I love how this story feels real emotionally despite the over the top fantasy elements

Absolute tosh ... and even the picture in her profile is a fake. The story was ripped off another submissions site.

erm...nope! all my own work n that really is me...

Story is great! Very sexy. One piece of constructive criticism is that it is "intents and purposes" not "intensive purposes". It was a bit jarring although the story itself is very good.