All Comments on 'Finding Love Ch. 06'

I'm so sad that this tory ended and cannot wait for the sequel! I love this series a lot! Thank you!

Great ending. I am really glad that you are going to continue with Kern's story, and maybe after that you can mate off Caleb and Tara!

Redeeming Ivy's half-brothers is a sweet twist in the way you've resolved this story. There's something powerful about the way love can alter us, make us better (or sometimes worse). Best of all is when love shows us a path through our own darkness and sets us free. I'm glad Caleb and Kern saw the light, and glad Dolmas was destroyed for his wickedness, too!

please post Kern side!

Can't wait for Kern's story! I absolutely loved this story!!

i have really enjoyed the story from the beginning to the end and i can not wait for the sequel ending a story with a cliff hanger is maddening but smart ensures everyone will read the sequel excellent work

I can't believe you finished this storyline in one chapter. I am really surprised not so much that it ends because all storys must end. But the fact that you tied up all the loose ends with the current storyline and it didn't feel rushed. I can't tell you how many storys I have read that had a surprise ending, only w/most the surprise was that the author was so concerned w/the next book in series that the "surprise" finish is absolutely terrible. You did the complete opposite. You wrote a surprise ending that truly Kicked Ass.

I'll keep an eye out for the next installment to this now "Series" you are writing. And also congrats on finishing your first ever story. I keep forgetting you were a virgin before chapter one of this story posted. LMAO Just keep having fun whatever you do!

what a wonderful story, the ending while I am sad to see it end was spot on.

but i have enjoyed every chapter.

*****

Your first submission? Really? Cannot wait to read more because you can only get better. Thanks for your time and imagination, it is much appreciated!

it really has to end ??? :'(

Nice job. I like how the boys slowly realized they were wrong. They have alot to make up for but you made them do things that showed their feelings had changed. They were victims of Dolmas in their own way.

I look forward to the next story. keep writing!

Can't wait for the new series to come out. For your first series it was perfect, and I loved it.

i really liked it and i hope you post kern's story really soon because i really like him! i <3 kern! lol

anticlimatic I was thinking for a bigger ending than that and what was with them all ending up at the same place together at the same time?

I like the ending at 1st i was thinking "but but but... *pouts*" then say you plan on starting Kern's. So I'm happy.. as long as you dont name the story Kernel Of Truth or something like that.. no wait come to think of it that would be funny as hell lol

:o) ^5's to you! absolutely loved this story!!! when i saw the sidebar almost at the bottom, i was like..."no...no..no...it CAN'T end!!" lol i read some more.."ok...it has to end SOMETIME!" so i was ok with it ending. WOOHOO!! CHARACTER stories?!?!? YES!!! lol i'm truly a happy lady!

:o) thanks durablue..i love your work. you've shown me a genre i didn't realize i'd love to read!

:-p i do love vampires though.."Edward" is hot!

I really loved this whole story and look forward to Kern & Jade's story. :)

Could not put it down! Very glad that Dolmas got his and can't wait to read about Kern and Caleb.

Can't wait to read about the brothers. But please, make them work VERY hard for their mates. They were assholes.

Please don't make us wait!

Just finished your story, great plot and characters and can't wait for the follow up stories with the other characters. keep up the great work!

I started reading it before but just now saw a new chapter had been posted, not any chapter but the last!! I loved the ending, how Caleb and Kern changed for the better. Please hurry up with the sequel... I can't wait to read Kerns story, I seriously hope he's gonna pull through :)

im in love wit this story its amazing ,plot, and characters please post more of this story.

The ending was a great way to end Finding Love. I agree with another comment of making Kern and Caleb work very hard to get their mates. Great work, great writing, great characters and a great story....loved it!!!

This was a great story!!!! I hope you're still planning on continuing the series. I'm excited to see how Kern and Jade's relationship progresses.

Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it and hope you continue the series.

So please post soon, I'll be waiting! I'd not miss a story this good for the world. I'm only waiting for Caleb to realise who his mate is (if I'm right, of course...)

I clicked on this story hoping to enjoy a new good were story. Once I started reading I realized I recognized it, I had read it before. However, unlike many other times when this has happened to me I realized I was quite excited to read this story again. Now that I have finished it I realize two things, one the first time through I some how missed the last chapter or two. Two, I can not wait for the next story[s?] with Ivy's half brothers. Your writing style is just as smooth and engaging the second time through with just the right amount of character development. Eagerly awaiting more of your work - wish Lit had a better way of letting us keep track of favorite on going stories.

'nogh said.

This story should've been longer. FUCK YOU. But it was great. :] BUT FUCK YOU, YOU LITTLE FUCKER. Had to get that out there. There were a few times when I got a little confused (the first/second chapter) but this was overall well-written. Great job, and I hope you write more! This story, especially, deserves a sequel. Like, damn. What happens with Sam and Ivy's mom? And Caleb and Kern? HOLY FUCK, but that was a good story. (fuck you for not making this longer.)

Great story! I just read all 6 chapters in one sitting and am so wishing for more! I hope your muse let's you continue on. I know how fickle she can be at times. I can't wait to read Kern and Caleb's stories! Please keep writing.

if you are not in paperback-WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU WAITING FOR!

Ok first read this when it was being posted . Now I'm starting to wonder if there will ever be more? Please don't be one of those authors where we have to wait a full year for a new chapter.

OMG...one of the best stories I have read on this site. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more.

please write more this is one of the best stories on this site love

Please right some more!!! Please!!!!! ~on my knees!!!~

Can't wait for the continuation! <3

u have to finish it, we need to know how Kern is, how Caleb will fit into his new pack, how Mary and Sam is, and Holland has to find a strong and feisty mate.

Hoping you haven't given up on your plan for a sequel to this story. If nothing else you should at least write an epilogue for this one, to answer the obvious questions like what happened to Kern and how the news of Dolmas's death effects Mary. It would also be nice to know how Caleb handles spending time witb his mother, Tara and the rest of Daylon and Ivy's pack.

Thank you for a great read!

Your writing was very engaging! Can't wait to read

Your sequel.

This was one of the best stories I've read in a while.. I couldn't stop reading until I was done.. I'm really looking forward to see how everything works out in the end..

I know that life can get very busy, but your reader would love and ending to all you characters storys. I love your story and could not stop readying it. Good job!

Just taking a guess that there will be no sequel anymore? its been over a year and still waiting.

If you want to continue the story,you better do it quick

It was a great story,although i would have liked an ending,which seems more commom place than a story with a real ending.Why do people start things,get a few fans,and then just stop writing,such a shame.Maybe one day you might come back and finish it,,,not counting on it,but dont start something you cant finish.Such a disapointment.

Its been over a yr please post more...

Is it sad the sequel hasn't been posted? Yes. Does it detract at all from how great of a story this is? Definitely not. We all know the couples get together- Sam and Mary, Kern and Jade, and Caleb and Tara. I imagine it's hard to write a story when the "bad guy" is gone. My only disappointment is Holland not getting a for sure happy ending. Maybe there will one day be a continuation, but I enjoyed your writing style so much, I just wish you had more stories in general. Thank you for Finding Love. It was truly a pleasure to read.

Would have loved to read a sequal, but it seems that the sequal isn't coming which is a pitty. You did say there would be a sequal.

I'm really hoping for a sequel to this story. I'm constantly checked to see if you have uploaded anything new. And will keep checking...

Come on! Another Lit writer who just can't finish what they write.

More, please! It's enthralling!

come on man it's been over a year, are you going to write the sequel or not.

It seems we are getting a bit irritated waiting for this sequel you promised? When is it coming, if it is coming?

You know you have a lot of people demanding for more, I am just one in a long line... But you definitely owe us, after giving us teasing glimpses of what the sequel is going to be... I definitely am interested in what happens with Holland! Can't wait!

I really do like your story a lot, just dissapointed that you haven't given us the sequel you promised us. I had hoped you would have written it by now.

Damn good writing! Hope you add some more!

Are you ever going to give us the sequel or not

Sorry for being annoying,but... When's the sequel coming out?

Hope you find the time and energy to continue this, read it many times. Please consider. You write well. Steve

Wonderfully told even though it was grim in regards to the abuse, but the beacon of hope you unveiled in that such behavior can be unlearnt with great support and love. Great story please add to it or grace us with another. -Jen

This story is wonderful I think that it could do with more chapters cause I feel like we are hanging... but I do hope that you will get going on the sequel, and soon! May I also ask that you add some wolf form of 'loving' , also I would love to see them tied together and in more than one position (like woman on top-so he has a view) well just a taught, and I would really like to see the wolf action! Post soon PLEASE!! :)

i really loved this series well thought well built and really want to read the sequels please continue with the sequels eagerly awaiting it!!

ok this just can't end i want to read more there has to be more

I just read all the stories in one night......and they were great......

it really is too bad no one mentions how that selfish mother abandoned two tiny babies to a monster. it's no wonder they turned out like they did. it's not that they were taught one way, it's that they were fucking abused heavily and the only way out was to become like the abuser. it's a tale we see repeated in the world over and over again.

while i'm glad the mother found love, i still can't forgive her for abandoning her kids, especially when she basically fed them to dolmas

No longer interested in reading this series, but thanks for the memories; it's taking too long for your updates.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to All!

Annabelle

Really wish you would tell Kern's story.

Really loved this i got to say its the best thing i have come across what happen to you i looked for the next part and omg there ent one so sad it ended without a endding would have really loved to read on your an amazing writer and i really couldnt stop reading

Loved this storyline and was hopeful to see the rest of it play out. Hope that you might write them still.

Love the brother and sister banter!!! Please Continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Still waiting. Come on, it been three years now. You could have written 2 or 3 stories since then. Please give us something to read please.

We are all eagerly waiting for a sequel. I'm especially looking for that aspect where Kern realizes the error of his old ways and does a lot of making-up for his past transgressions. Please give us the continuation of this amazing story!

It took me the weekend but I read all six chapters and fell in love with this story! I'm disappointed because it has ended so quickly. I love how you didn't make this about sex But weaved an incredible story which has captivated me and held me to my computer all weekend!!! You ARE an artist and this needs to be turn into a novel!!! With a series following of Caleb and Kern, Mary and Sam, a prequel to Rigor and Kiara, possibly Holland finding love at last, and don't forget my fav Daylon and Ivy, maybe a baby or two (and Ivy settling into life as a wife and learning to use and control her alter she-wolf). And don't forget the sibling banter (More Please) I laughed all weekend! This is truly one of the best stories I have read and you weaved an incredible magic that was hilarious and captivating from beginning to the very end, I hope you do continue at some point, truly a fan!!!! Will be re-reading this very soon!

I use this sight to get my mental then physical juices flowing to "take care of business". When I first started my journey of the day, I was being greatly disappointed by the stories I was reading. Nothing caught my interest enough to get even the slightest bit of turned on. I needed release! Then I came across the first chapter of this story & I was hooked! I went from wanting to rub one out to not even touching myself (ok, maybe a little) to being completely enthralled with the story. By chapter 2, I decided this needs to become a novel & a movie. Not some half assed cheap flick with bad acting either, please God no Kristen Stewart, but with great actors playing incredible roles. By the end of chapter 6, I was left wanting more, needing more!!! Please oh please fill us in! What happens next?! Help a gal out, let the story continue!

You deserve an encore! Your words dance across the pages and keep a captivated audience. As always, your creativity shines through relentlessly! Blessings to you and yours!

~smiles~

From the first chapter to the last, a lovely story. Since this was written in 2011, I have to assume you are no longer writing. Too bad, we'll never get Kern and Jade's story -- but so happy we got Daylon and Ivy's.

Do not read much Nonhuman stuff on this site, but certainly glad I read this tale. Truly exceptional storyline, writing style, and character development. Ranks up there with "Sacrafice" which think is some of the best writing to be found anywhere. But, unfortunately for us readers those characters, as with yours, seem to have been left unfinished. So, thank you for this excellent piece and hope you are still out there to read this. Horseman6:8

The story was great, but happens next??? What happens with Kern & Jade? Caleb & Tara? Mary and Sam?? Desperately need to know????

I would love to get Kern and Caleb stories!

What happened? Did you just give up?

I really wanted to read Kern’s story, but it looks like you haven’t posted anything since 2011 so I won’t get my hopes up. It was fun while it lasted though, thank you!

I really loved this story, I hope you continue with Kern and Caleb’s story too..

Helluva good read. Too bad this author stopped posting after this, it says "The End," but it feels unfinished.

Some problems with wrong words and grammar but fairly minor. That aside a really cute story with good planning that carried the reader along. Worth 5 stars but a shame no further posts as would have liked to hear more about Keen and Cable.

I rushed my posting and missed that Kern and Caleb had been autocorrected by my Samsung. Sorry.

I really want to read more from this pack. Please write more again

Very VERY good story!!! I KNEW it wasn't going to be finished in this lil chapter because there's TOO MUCH left to be said and worked out! But its been YEARS since you "ended" it and you've not posted any other story so i'm not sure What If Anything is going to be done. I HOPE you Will post and I look forward to the continuation and ending! I have you and your stories as favorites so I'll keep an eye out.

I agree with the previous posts. I doubt it, but I do hope this story continue.

This is an incredibly well structured story! Like the others said, I hope you do eventually give us Kern's story as well. You are a truly great story teller!

Cannot wait for kern’s story

I truly hope one day you feel up to continuing with Kern and Caleb's stories. Sadly I fear that that ship has sailed as it has been so long since you finished Ivy and Daylon's tale. Hoping this post finds you safe, sane and healthy. Please continue writing as you have tremendous talent as a story teller. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Good read. Very fond of your writing style. Kinda disappointed not to see Kern’s story posted. Hope all is well and that you are continuing to write even if not posting. Thanks for the sharing your creativity.

Kern can save a hospital stay by texting Jade to see if she can contact Daylon, the Wolfland Alpha and forward him this pic. snap the truck and add 'can be found in garage behind Ivy's old place'. I have trouble with voice mail myself, but can edit a text until it's perfect. Don't see the follow-up series. If you're printing copy written material here, then I expect you're publishing for pay elsewhere. Post where please! I note too many writers with unfinished series.

Anon56

I wish if there were a spinoff with Kern and it was posted somewhere else that the web address to where would be posted. Otherwise it's been many years, if there is not spinoff then maybe the writer had things to take care off in real life. This is one of my favorite series.