All Comments on 'Be Careful What You Hope For Ch. 01'

by Craysee

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ChatNoir36ChatNoir36over 12 years ago
Looking forward to the next instalment!

Can't wait to read what happens next :-)

isadoreisadoreover 12 years ago

and then what? hurry and write the next installment before I cum!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice intro,

Chapter two please, this has the makings of a very nice read, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great thanks

i enjoyed it thanks wish i could find that in south carolina

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
and them what?

did he go all the way and fuck the guy,and did he like it and go back for more.

was this a turning point of no return.

I need to know............okay?

Rwa4768Rwa4768over 5 years ago
Good start

This was a good build up to the story, but you stopped just as you got to the sex part. Give us a little more to keep our interest.

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