Really good writing style, and story too. But the end was abrupt and lackluster. He should've helped his mom get her hand out, then plundered her exquisite body more, since it seemed obvious she would've been open to more sex with her son. 4 out of 5.
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Anonymous08/05/11
Too close . . .
to being rape! I know, I know that she sounded like she was willing but only after he managed to get her turned on. He still forced himself onto her, in my opinion. I usually like mother/son incest, but not this theme.
i thot your ending was planned and well thought out. i think its more realistic then them "finding out they're both secretly in love withh eachother and are soul mates" bullshit. cuz thats so pathetic. This one made me laugh
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Anonymous08/06/11
Hitting a slump...
This author has produced quite a few torrid Mom-son tales in the past: "Son's Halloween Party", "New Year's Eve Seduction", and "Valentine's Date With Mom", and a couple sequels. He also recently submitted "Riding on Son's Lap" which, although very closely akin to at least 3 other similar stories, was a fairly good variation on that particular theme. Thus, I'm inclined to cut him a little slack on this latest submission.
That doesn't, however, mean that I liked or enjoyed the tale. To be honest, this is one of those times where I wish that Literotica allowed "0" (zero) or negative numbers to be used in rating a story.
The premise - Mom's wrist caught in garbage disposal when her bracelet gets snagged - is ludicrous from the outset, to any guy who's ever had to perform maintenance at the kitchen sink. There's simply nothing for the average bracelet to get caught on, in the mouth of the disposal. Plus, if the Mom was any woman of average intelligence, she'd have removed the bracelet before attempting to retrieve her wedding ring!
Further: If you actually READ the story, paying just the tiniest bit of attention to the whole laughable scene with the oil, it's obvious that Centrum1000 didn't take much time to picture the scene in his mind before engaging the keyboard. The sheer "physics" of the scene don't work out the way he describes, if you'd actually "try this at home".
Finally, the primary character (the son) is an absolute ass! Once he's got her hot enough to overcome the usual set of objections, she seems to really get into the incestuous sex with her son. In fact, it's probable, judging by her reaction to the whole thing, that she'd probably want to continue this new aspect of her relationship with her son. Right up to the point where he walks away like the uncouth bastard he really is, leaving her standing there with her hand still caught in the disposal.
If Centrum hadn't been in the midst of a terrible case of "writer's slump", he'd no doubt have worked the scene in such a way that the son's body-contact with Mom, while he worked at actually freeing her hand from the disposal, got her so hot and bothered that there would have been only one method of reward on her mind for her darling rescuer - and it would have consumed a lot more "quality time" than the three-minute "quickie" the son actually got out of this incident.
I'd rate this one at about a minus-five!
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Anonymous08/06/11
Cries out for a sequel . . .
. . . in which the father horsewhips his son and throws him out with the trash.
by
Anonymous09/11/11
Needs a lower rating
Story is a huge disappointment and one star is too high a rating. With no backstory to explain why the son would treat his mother like that, he just comes off as an asswipe. Totally killed the eroticism of the story unless your into dedgradation and humiliation.
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Anonymous10/06/11
dick
ok i get the son coming home drunk and getting turned on by his mom ass, but this was more of a rape scene. and for him to treat his mom like a slut by leaving her there is just bullshit.now mo can tell the dad she was molested by the son so he gets the ass whoopin he deserves. for a normally great writer this was a total disgrace.
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Anonymous11/28/11
MORE!
Perfect. More of this type of story would be great. You are one of the best writers here.Thanks.
wow what a surprise ,,, anonymous pussies all over the place
all of you who post hateful comments anonymously go buy yourself a pair of balls for xmas and log into your account and then post ... you pussies ... all that 'internet courage' under the anonymous name ... i mean for god's sake, you don't have the balls to post under an account even ... how much more cowardly could you get?
for the author, good story ... good build up i thought but a little quick ending ;) but he was worked up so maybe he couldn't help it ;) good job :)
Must be annoying when a bunch of anonymous individuals slag off about your work. I thought this was a great 5 rated story until the last couple of lines; but it still deserves a 4.
Could I suggest a further scenario. Son thinks about what he's done and returns to mum and offers to get her free for ongoing sex. Father now awake hears this and comes into the kitchen. One of your anonymous commentators suggested that the father should horsewhip the son and throw him out with the trash. Why not turn that on its head; the father tries to attack the son, but in turn he beats the father, ties him up and forces him to watch as son screws mum. Setting for a nice little cuckold tale, even potential sissification.
I'd also like to thanks you because in two of your stories, Auction Block and Valentine's Day, you gave me a clue for the ending of a story that I've become stuck on - suppressed desire for domination set free.
For all of the Dumb Shits here bitching about the anon posters lets all post our real names. As far as the ending goes, The son was a ass that needs to be beaten to with in a inch of his life.
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Anonymous01/26/12
Coming from a Guy
Pretty Ruthless. I mean a hand stuck like and all the effing going on and then not even helping clean up and leaving the poor woman in the dark in that awkward posture. Too Cruel. Didn't seem Mother-Son at all. More like homeless guy and poor Milf whos stuck. Ending too ruthless. and no Im not some feminist woman lol. Im a dude saying this.
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Anonymous02/02/12
too nasty
The ending is too nasty. Its cruel and misogynistic. Its a shame really because you can really write, but I had to give it a 1.
by
Anonymous03/24/12
Decent story.
However if the switch needed to be turned off, then it was on. Her hand wasn't caught , it was missing. The ending missed the mark also.
You had me, right up to the end. Even if the story was very contrived, hand stuck in the garbage disposal, it didn't deserve the ending it had. Dumb ass could have at least called 911 to get help in getting her unstuck... then maybe all of the Firemen could take a turn at her and make it totally BS. Sorry but it's a 1 for this one.
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Anonymous10/03/12
THE ENDING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
I' VE LOOKED AT A LOT OF THE COMMENTS, AND MOST OF US AGREE THE ENDING SUCKS. HE COULD HAVE CLEANED HER UP, AFTER THE FUCKING HE GAVE HER, SAID MOM I CAN'T HELP AND CALLED 911. AS IT SITS, WHEN DAD FINDS OUT , THIS KID IS IN FOR ONE HELL OF AN ASS KICKING. THE STORY IS NOT BAD ,BUT NEXT TIME TRY FOR A BETTER ENDING. AN ALMOST FAN
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Anonymous12/02/12
Stupid ending!!!
What an absurd way to end a decent story. He should have gotten her hand unstuck and you could have kept the story going for more good read.
This was a dumb ending!!!!!! After all the nice things he said about his mother, you end it with her stuck and for his dad to find her like that......You are sick!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by
Anonymous02/18/13
Mom lets son cum onto her satin lingerie
if you like mom son action cum see my videos at.
w w w . c l i p 4 s a l e . c o m / 5 9 5 7 3
You really painted a picture of a very stupid young man. The only choice he left his mother with is to tell his father that he came home, saw that she was stuck, attempted to help her and when he failed he just raped her. To cover her own ass, she can tell her husband she is pissed at him for sleeping through her repeated calls for help.
At 18 and still in high school, the kid will find his ass out on the street, losing every advantage he had in coming from what was probably a middle class home. It could not happen to a nicer guy.
The ending sucked big time.
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Anonymous04/02/13
OR....
She could say that she was doing dishes when a strange man she couldn't see or identify, being stuck, and was raped. Then, after the rape not during, their extremely drunk and incoherent son came home and obviously wasn't able to help in that current state. Just sayin.
by
Anonymous05/27/13
Good
I hope you planted a baby up her womb.
by
Anonymous06/10/13
thief
This is the same story as a short porn starring Jodi West.
by
Anonymous07/03/13
Noticedthattoo
Jodi West seems to be using a lot of literotica stories for her Xvideos.
by
Anonymous08/02/13
Pff
The ending sucked indeed.. Now there's no possibility for a nice sequel either or imagination.. Leaving your mom dripping with your cum out of her pussy is stupid as fuck, if he helped her he could've fucked her daily.. pffrt.
"Helping Mother:" - Jessica and Andy - (Mother and Son)
The title of this story has no comparison to the content and context of the tale; there is no comparison of Andy the son "helping" his mother Jessica. If anyting at all, the son--after drunkeningly getting his sotted rocks off--used, abused, discarded and purposely left his mother in a heightened state of sexual need and orgasms, dejected and leaving her alone in the dark!! His actions are not of anyone "...turly appreciating her body...", after using her as if she were a soiled pair of panties wrapped around his masturating dick!!
This at first, reminded me a lot of another story. The guy is drunk, but I cut him no slack. Where exactly is the help? Helping her into a beating and /or divorce?
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Anonymous12/27/13
This story is a word for word account of this video:
http://www.momson.info/2013/10/son-rubbed-h is-cock-on-his-mom-ass.html
Does anyone know who the chick is in the video? She is amazing!
by
Anonymous01/01/14
Jodi west
This is exactly what happens in her film except the force part
Oh, that ending! Fancy leaving his mother stuck by her wrist in the plug-hole and just going off to bed, its silly, and nonsensical. Otherwise, I loved it. Well done.
This boy in deep shit. Ya don't fuck a woman & leave her stranded. In real life, Momma woulda slapped the shit out of that dumb azz!
This one wasn't up to your normal standard.
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Anonymous09/23/15
Say what; sick - sick
Until the end you had a nice story going from your fingertips. Then you left mom still caught in the sink. That was sick - for that you got a one star. Terrible ending!
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Anonymous10/10/15
Hmm, the author is loser..probably never touched a woman before (willingly)
And you know what I have never read such a crappy story ever. A woman with one hand stuck in the sink while she gets raped....hmm. Got to say the author is a loser that needs to be castrated, flogged and set on fire. You don't treat women like that...and to let her be like that to see what happens when the father come homes. I can imagine. "Son...did you rape your mother? "uh..uh...uh..yeah..so?" "Well son.....I'm going to teach you a lesson....give me your hand..give me your hand!!" Stick it in the blender now!!!!" Ok...now turn it on....Yeah..I said turn it on now!!!"
Son...that was fun...right? Yeah..I thought so...Ok...now drop your pants....your mom wants to teach you a lesson too...but I'm not sure that you will like it.....but hey...rapists deserve no pity."
English
Huh?
Really good writing style, and story too. But the end was abrupt and lackluster. He should've helped his mom get her hand out, then plundered her exquisite body more, since it seemed obvious she would've been open to more sex with her son. 4 out of 5.
Too close . . .
to being rape! I know, I know that she sounded like she was willing but only after he managed to get her turned on. He still forced himself onto her, in my opinion. I usually like mother/son incest, but not this theme.
yummy
great story..I love how he left her there half naked and freshly fucked.
The son was an obnoxious prick. Fucking her was okay, if she was okay with it, but LEAVING HER with her hand in the disposal!!
Why?
not fair
nooooo! he should not leave her like that. and dont you leave such a good start.... cuntinyou.
A good story, so I thought for a while
But the ending really sucks
anon
ending did truly suck
What a prick
Stupidest ending imaginable.
Worst case scenario:- Mother loses her hand.
Best case scenario:- Father finds her like that and cuts the balls off his fucking sadistic moron of a son.
Either way it firmly slams the door on any possibility of a sequel, which is something the readers can be thankful for.
I really pity the poor sick deadshit fuckwit who dreamed this one up.
bad ending1
i enjoyed the story....until the ending. That ending flat out sucked.
waste of time
Story started with a bit of promise but eventually the protagonist, as well as the writer, showed true colors...
You were doing well...
But that ending is one of the more idiotic ones I've ever read -- anywhere.
You had the makings of a fairly good story, but the end sucked and that killed it all!!!!!!!
fuck those guys
i thot your ending was planned and well thought out. i think its more realistic then them "finding out they're both secretly in love withh eachother and are soul mates" bullshit. cuz thats so pathetic. This one made me laugh
Hitting a slump...
This author has produced quite a few torrid Mom-son tales in the past: "Son's Halloween Party", "New Year's Eve Seduction", and "Valentine's Date With Mom", and a couple sequels. He also recently submitted "Riding on Son's Lap" which, although very closely akin to at least 3 other similar stories, was a fairly good variation on that particular theme. Thus, I'm inclined to cut him a little slack on this latest submission.
That doesn't, however, mean that I liked or enjoyed the tale. To be honest, this is one of those times where I wish that Literotica allowed "0" (zero) or negative numbers to be used in rating a story.
The premise - Mom's wrist caught in garbage disposal when her bracelet gets snagged - is ludicrous from the outset, to any guy who's ever had to perform maintenance at the kitchen sink. There's simply nothing for the average bracelet to get caught on, in the mouth of the disposal. Plus, if the Mom was any woman of average intelligence, she'd have removed the bracelet before attempting to retrieve her wedding ring!
Further: If you actually READ the story, paying just the tiniest bit of attention to the whole laughable scene with the oil, it's obvious that Centrum1000 didn't take much time to picture the scene in his mind before engaging the keyboard. The sheer "physics" of the scene don't work out the way he describes, if you'd actually "try this at home".
Finally, the primary character (the son) is an absolute ass! Once he's got her hot enough to overcome the usual set of objections, she seems to really get into the incestuous sex with her son. In fact, it's probable, judging by her reaction to the whole thing, that she'd probably want to continue this new aspect of her relationship with her son. Right up to the point where he walks away like the uncouth bastard he really is, leaving her standing there with her hand still caught in the disposal.
If Centrum hadn't been in the midst of a terrible case of "writer's slump", he'd no doubt have worked the scene in such a way that the son's body-contact with Mom, while he worked at actually freeing her hand from the disposal, got her so hot and bothered that there would have been only one method of reward on her mind for her darling rescuer - and it would have consumed a lot more "quality time" than the three-minute "quickie" the son actually got out of this incident.
I'd rate this one at about a minus-five!
Cries out for a sequel . . .
. . . in which the father horsewhips his son and throws him out with the trash.
Needs a lower rating
Story is a huge disappointment and one star is too high a rating. With no backstory to explain why the son would treat his mother like that, he just comes off as an asswipe. Totally killed the eroticism of the story unless your into dedgradation and humiliation.
dick
ok i get the son coming home drunk and getting turned on by his mom ass, but this was more of a rape scene. and for him to treat his mom like a slut by leaving her there is just bullshit.now mo can tell the dad she was molested by the son so he gets the ass whoopin he deserves. for a normally great writer this was a total disgrace.
MORE!
Perfect. More of this type of story would be great. You are one of the best writers here.Thanks.
wow what a surprise ,,, anonymous pussies all over the place
all of you who post hateful comments anonymously go buy yourself a pair of balls for xmas and log into your account and then post ... you pussies ... all that 'internet courage' under the anonymous name ... i mean for god's sake, you don't have the balls to post under an account even ... how much more cowardly could you get?
for the author, good story ... good build up i thought but a little quick ending ;) but he was worked up so maybe he couldn't help it ;) good job :)
Keep Going
Must be annoying when a bunch of anonymous individuals slag off about your work. I thought this was a great 5 rated story until the last couple of lines; but it still deserves a 4.
Could I suggest a further scenario. Son thinks about what he's done and returns to mum and offers to get her free for ongoing sex. Father now awake hears this and comes into the kitchen. One of your anonymous commentators suggested that the father should horsewhip the son and throw him out with the trash. Why not turn that on its head; the father tries to attack the son, but in turn he beats the father, ties him up and forces him to watch as son screws mum. Setting for a nice little cuckold tale, even potential sissification.
I'd also like to thanks you because in two of your stories, Auction Block and Valentine's Day, you gave me a clue for the ending of a story that I've become stuck on - suppressed desire for domination set free.
Thanks for this story, it has great potential.
Keep Going - continued
Just wanted to add a couple of points. IMHO, the ending tends to leave everybody up in the air; the mother, the son and the readers.
Perhaps, if the son were to return later, he could bring his camera and get some compromising pictures of mum to use for blackmail - and more sex!
Did'nt Work
For all of the Dumb Shits here bitching about the anon posters lets all post our real names. As far as the ending goes, The son was a ass that needs to be beaten to with in a inch of his life.
Coming from a Guy
Pretty Ruthless. I mean a hand stuck like and all the effing going on and then not even helping clean up and leaving the poor woman in the dark in that awkward posture. Too Cruel. Didn't seem Mother-Son at all. More like homeless guy and poor Milf whos stuck. Ending too ruthless. and no Im not some feminist woman lol. Im a dude saying this.
too nasty
The ending is too nasty. Its cruel and misogynistic. Its a shame really because you can really write, but I had to give it a 1.
Decent story.
However if the switch needed to be turned off, then it was on. Her hand wasn't caught , it was missing. The ending missed the mark also.
WTF!!
You had me, right up to the end. Even if the story was very contrived, hand stuck in the garbage disposal, it didn't deserve the ending it had. Dumb ass could have at least called 911 to get help in getting her unstuck... then maybe all of the Firemen could take a turn at her and make it totally BS. Sorry but it's a 1 for this one.
THE ENDING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
I' VE LOOKED AT A LOT OF THE COMMENTS, AND MOST OF US AGREE THE ENDING SUCKS. HE COULD HAVE CLEANED HER UP, AFTER THE FUCKING HE GAVE HER, SAID MOM I CAN'T HELP AND CALLED 911. AS IT SITS, WHEN DAD FINDS OUT , THIS KID IS IN FOR ONE HELL OF AN ASS KICKING. THE STORY IS NOT BAD ,BUT NEXT TIME TRY FOR A BETTER ENDING. AN ALMOST FAN
Stupid ending!!!
What an absurd way to end a decent story. He should have gotten her hand unstuck and you could have kept the story going for more good read.
DUMB!!!!!
This was a dumb ending!!!!!! After all the nice things he said about his mother, you end it with her stuck and for his dad to find her like that......You are sick!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mom lets son cum onto her satin lingerie
if you like mom son action cum see my videos at.
w w w . c l i p 4 s a l e . c o m / 5 9 5 7 3
i gotta agree
shitty ending dude. sort it out.
Stupid Boy
You really painted a picture of a very stupid young man. The only choice he left his mother with is to tell his father that he came home, saw that she was stuck, attempted to help her and when he failed he just raped her. To cover her own ass, she can tell her husband she is pissed at him for sleeping through her repeated calls for help.
At 18 and still in high school, the kid will find his ass out on the street, losing every advantage he had in coming from what was probably a middle class home. It could not happen to a nicer guy.
The ending sucked big time.
OR....
She could say that she was doing dishes when a strange man she couldn't see or identify, being stuck, and was raped. Then, after the rape not during, their extremely drunk and incoherent son came home and obviously wasn't able to help in that current state. Just sayin.
Good
I hope you planted a baby up her womb.
thief
This is the same story as a short porn starring Jodi West.
Noticedthattoo
Jodi West seems to be using a lot of literotica stories for her Xvideos.
Pff
The ending sucked indeed.. Now there's no possibility for a nice sequel either or imagination.. Leaving your mom dripping with your cum out of her pussy is stupid as fuck, if he helped her he could've fucked her daily.. pffrt.
found video
http://hornbunny.com/videos/son-helps-his-stuck-mo m-3790.html
"Helping Mother:" - Jessica and Andy - (Mother and Son)
The title of this story has no comparison to the content and context of the tale; there is no comparison of Andy the son "helping" his mother Jessica. If anyting at all, the son--after drunkeningly getting his sotted rocks off--used, abused, discarded and purposely left his mother in a heightened state of sexual need and orgasms, dejected and leaving her alone in the dark!! His actions are not of anyone "...turly appreciating her body...", after using her as if she were a soiled pair of panties wrapped around his masturating dick!!
This at first, reminded me a lot of another story. The guy is drunk, but I cut him no slack. Where exactly is the help? Helping her into a beating and /or divorce?
This story is a word for word account of this video:
http://www.momson.info/2013/10/son-rubbed-h is-cock-on-his-mom-ass.html
Does anyone know who the chick is in the video? She is amazing!
Jodi west
This is exactly what happens in her film except the force part
Very good until...
Oh, that ending! Fancy leaving his mother stuck by her wrist in the plug-hole and just going off to bed, its silly, and nonsensical. Otherwise, I loved it. Well done.
Wannabe Jodi west story
NO ORIGINALITY
0 out of 5
rude, inconsiderate, jerk
He won't be living there tomorrow.
worst ending ever!
sucks
you watch to much porn.....search boy helps stuck aunt you'll find the same story
I don't think so!!
This boy in deep shit. Ya don't fuck a woman & leave her stranded. In real life, Momma woulda slapped the shit out of that dumb azz!
This one wasn't up to your normal standard.
Say what; sick - sick
Until the end you had a nice story going from your fingertips. Then you left mom still caught in the sink. That was sick - for that you got a one star. Terrible ending!
Hmm, the author is loser..probably never touched a woman before (willingly)
And you know what I have never read such a crappy story ever. A woman with one hand stuck in the sink while she gets raped....hmm. Got to say the author is a loser that needs to be castrated, flogged and set on fire. You don't treat women like that...and to let her be like that to see what happens when the father come homes. I can imagine. "Son...did you rape your mother? "uh..uh...uh..yeah..so?" "Well son.....I'm going to teach you a lesson....give me your hand..give me your hand!!" Stick it in the blender now!!!!" Ok...now turn it on....Yeah..I said turn it on now!!!"
Son...that was fun...right? Yeah..I thought so...Ok...now drop your pants....your mom wants to teach you a lesson too...but I'm not sure that you will like it.....but hey...rapists deserve no pity."
Too Funny!
Loved It!
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