You blew the ending with the son betraying his mother like that you should slap your self for that shit
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Anonymous03/27/16
A re-write is in order
If you are going to do a rape story, then you certainly need to remain consistent. Having the mother go from no don't to oh yea Fuck me does not work. There should have been a more reluctant transformation. And like others have said, if you turned her by giving her an orgasm and she forgave him, at least you should have freed her. You should do better.
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Anonymous05/13/16
Theres a porn scene based on this. Just google,"moms hand stuck in the sink xxx".
Theres a porn scene based on this story. Just google "moms hand stuck in the sink xxx". I saw that scene before reading this story and i decided i should let everyone know that there is a porn scene based on this. I dont remember the actress's name but she wears some kind of a jeans jacket with a dark pink shirt inside, as far as i can recall. Readers, do check out the video too. Its a pretty popular scene.
Now what Andy should have done in this story is to phone his black teenage friend & let his black friend have Jessica's hot tight wet married snatch as well - you can bet the black kid would have fucked & shot his young black seed deep inside Jessica's tight married body more than once (probably about eight times I think !) - nothing better than a young black cock for a married white cunt - delicious.
Thanks for a very erotic & kinky story - beautiful.
English
Good until the ending.
You blew the ending big time.
you blew it
You blew the ending with the son betraying his mother like that you should slap your self for that shit
A re-write is in order
If you are going to do a rape story, then you certainly need to remain consistent. Having the mother go from no don't to oh yea Fuck me does not work. There should have been a more reluctant transformation. And like others have said, if you turned her by giving her an orgasm and she forgave him, at least you should have freed her. You should do better.
Theres a porn scene based on this. Just google,"moms hand stuck in the sink xxx".
Theres a porn scene based on this story. Just google "moms hand stuck in the sink xxx". I saw that scene before reading this story and i decided i should let everyone know that there is a porn scene based on this. I dont remember the actress's name but she wears some kind of a jeans jacket with a dark pink shirt inside, as far as i can recall. Readers, do check out the video too. Its a pretty popular scene.
Lovely
Now what Andy should have done in this story is to phone his black teenage friend & let his black friend have Jessica's hot tight wet married snatch as well - you can bet the black kid would have fucked & shot his young black seed deep inside Jessica's tight married body more than once (probably about eight times I think !) - nothing better than a young black cock for a married white cunt - delicious.
Thanks for a very erotic & kinky story - beautiful.
Sarah Leather, London England.
leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk
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