All Comments on 'The Awakening of Sweetlips'

What the blank is your problem. For someone who seems to find everything wrong with these stories why do you keep reading them, this is the third story I have read where you have commented the same comment.

Get a life, and if you are so concerned why not put your name on here instead of hiding behind anonymous

very well done! loved it!

Refreshing, unique and fucking erotic! Occasionally a story is written that incites the reader to demand a sequel at the risk of detracting from it's predecessor. This is the case with your tale. You did a masterful job of encompassing all key elements for a complete novella in just three pages and leave us with a perfect Hitchcock style ending that warrants nothing further. But no one has the one chip, beer or hit of the pipe does one? There is no reality or excitement in restraint. Give us all of sweet Abby's fat ass.

This is a wonderful story and it made me so wet. I loved Abby's internal struggles before she finally gave in to her inner slut. Could definitely do with a sequel.