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by Anonymous

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by meandering108/21/11

A wonderful story .....slightly spoiled by small errors .

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by Anonymous08/23/11

too many adjectives

You're just trying too hard. I think if you would have kept it simple and stretched out the story line it would have been a better story. JMHO

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by Anonymous08/29/11

Provacative

An elegant, yet mysterious darkness hypnotizes the reader to beg for more.

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