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The Nurse

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/07/11

nice

nice, but please get some body to proof read it. Gasp without the "p" makes a very funny mistake.

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by skywriterxxx08/07/11

great story!

Well done, great theme, nicely written. A few typo's, but not bad!

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by Anonymous08/08/11

Oh ok

Oh, so that was a typo! I got a tiny bit confused when she suddenly farted and then the story moved on. xD Very very sexy though. It featured my favorite type of roleplay ;)

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by Anonymous02/02/14

Funny or misspelled?

Your typos were hilarious!
"She reached up and pressed her beasts around my cock."

"She let out a loud gas as I entered her."

Was that a queef or a fart?

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