All Comments on 'Casual Encounters of Transition'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I was about to get off and then I read your story. Thanks for the sexual frustration jack ass!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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In the sentence "My sphincter feels as though I have shoved amber after amber from a campfire up there simply to cool them off. I need to cool this amber." you referred to amber. The correct word is ember. Amber is petrified tree sap. Ember is a small piece of burning or glowing coal or wood in a fire.

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Getting my shit together isn't as sexy as I thought it'd be. It's best to avoid life and read some porn.