All Comments on 'The Second Love of My Life Ch. 01'

But where was his wife, while he was deflowering his wife's sister?

I think that the story should continue. How he is going to convince his wife that he wants both her and her sister as his wives?

Thanks for the good read.

Where is the wife in all this, did I miss something? I guess

The questions are answered in Chapter 2 of this story. I haven't decided if there will be a Chapter 3...

I love the story, and the character development is great, but there are a lot of typos, omitted words, wrong prepositions - minor stuff, but the detract from the reading. If you have a proofreader clean things up, this story goes from 4 stars to 5 in an instant.