This is your first story that you have turned my interest away. I do not see any good qualities in Becky. I can see how she is angry at the world, and resents her father. But now she is breaking the law. It also seems like she is on the path to blackmail, or other illegal activities. Her own interest in watching/feeling/tasting men's orgasm does not bother me. Her general attitude does. Especially toward adults. William does interest me. He is growing out of the confines that his wife locked him into. Sadly, I will no longer continue to read this series.
I enjoyed it. A little rough in spots and a tad bit of cognitive dissonance on the part of Becky. But the "heart throb" feeling she has for Grace and her response are right on.
I hope LancerinLA is wrong about Becky, but I do fear that that this has the makings of a sexual Greek tragedy. I found it hard to be pleasureably aroused by the adult threesome knowing that their relatively "innocent" pleasure may well blow up in their faces via Becky's (all too understandable) predilection for finding betrayal in/from the adults in her life.
That said, I couldn't stop reading, and unlike LancerinLA, I can't wait to see where this story goes.
At the first, I was really enjoying the story. A young girl raised in a rigid environment by a sadistic mother and sad father, coming into her own. The father able to realize that he is a man. But then Becky turns into such a selfish, rotten skeeve. Sad that's the way the story went. I don't like leaving a story before it's done. But this one was making me feel icky.
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Sad but true
This is your first story that you have turned my interest away. I do not see any good qualities in Becky. I can see how she is angry at the world, and resents her father. But now she is breaking the law. It also seems like she is on the path to blackmail, or other illegal activities. Her own interest in watching/feeling/tasting men's orgasm does not bother me. Her general attitude does. Especially toward adults. William does interest me. He is growing out of the confines that his wife locked him into. Sadly, I will no longer continue to read this series.
On the other hand
I enjoyed it. A little rough in spots and a tad bit of cognitive dissonance on the part of Becky. But the "heart throb" feeling she has for Grace and her response are right on.
Mixed Feelings
I hope LancerinLA is wrong about Becky, but I do fear that that this has the makings of a sexual Greek tragedy. I found it hard to be pleasureably aroused by the adult threesome knowing that their relatively "innocent" pleasure may well blow up in their faces via Becky's (all too understandable) predilection for finding betrayal in/from the adults in her life.
That said, I couldn't stop reading, and unlike LancerinLA, I can't wait to see where this story goes.
I just cannot continue
At the first, I was really enjoying the story. A young girl raised in a rigid environment by a sadistic mother and sad father, coming into her own. The father able to realize that he is a man. But then Becky turns into such a selfish, rotten skeeve. Sad that's the way the story went. I don't like leaving a story before it's done. But this one was making me feel icky.
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