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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Full stops are there for a reason.

Shorter sentences can greatly increase the dramatic effect of a story like this. Learn that, and keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
GANGBANG SQUADS.

LINDA BENEDICT.

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